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Part Eleven of Twelve: The Mystery Of The Season Of All Hallows Eve It was obvious to Kenneth that by unlocking the door Bridgette had unleashed some...
Part Seven of the Season's Mystery. Bridgette had passed out a figure lying next to her son no longer aware of what was going on, unable to hear the...
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What a great place to focus a
Posted on Tue, 24 Jan 2023
What a great place to focus a poem Paul. I like how you end it on a note where the reader has to make up their own mind which way the relationship will go.
now that would have been another story if the swan had refused to get off. Imagine it flapping its wings around the bus, would have caused absolute chaos, there would have been such mayhem I really don't want to imagine.
I'm with Jack too. Although I like the idea of being in charge, for me it comes with too many challenges and responsibility. I hope Archibald can cope and doesn't have too many anxieties...after all there are leaders and followers, and Archibald...
What a great place to focus a
Posted on Tue, 24 Jan 2023
What a great place to focus a poem Paul. I like how you end it on a note where the reader has to make up their own mind which way the relationship will go.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in A View of the Hudson
An apt poem for the I P.
Posted on Tue, 17 Jan 2023
An apt poem for the I P.
These lines did get me thinking:-
gifts anonymous
made privately
to ease distress,
It does depend on the situation. There's nothing worse that finding out you've given money to...
Read full commentPosted in For whose benefit …?
Hi Kurt,
Posted on Tue, 17 Jan 2023
Hi Kurt,
now that would have been another story if the swan had refused to get off. Imagine it flapping its wings around the bus, would have caused absolute chaos, there would have been such mayhem I really don't want to imagine.
...
Read full commentPosted in Extraordinary Experience On The Bus
Great twist on Tolkien's
Posted on Sun, 15 Jan 2023
Great twist on Tolkien's Middle Earth. How the envy of the Orcs gave rise to their jealousy and left them with so much hatred.
Would love to read more.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Argibel The Orc : The Bitter Romantic Chapter 1
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Fri, 13 Jan 2023
Hi Rhiannon,
this was such a special poem of hope as the New Year begins.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in January (northern hemisphere)
I couldn't pick out a
Posted on Tue, 17 Jan 2023
I couldn't pick out a favourite stanza, just loved this poem from beginning to end Paul.
Those starlings are so magical to watch too.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Great and Secret Show
I'm with Jack too. Although I
Posted on Mon, 09 Jan 2023
I'm with Jack too. Although I like the idea of being in charge, for me it comes with too many challenges and responsibility. I hope Archibald can cope and doesn't have too many anxieties...after all there are leaders and followers, and Archibald...
Read full commentPosted in The Fall and Rise of...Archibald Thurble?
A poem can say so much, and
Posted on Mon, 09 Jan 2023
A poem can say so much, and you've captured that essence Rhiannon. Great idea for the I P too.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in 1949
This is such a beautiful,
Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023
This is such a beautiful, haunting story Paul. It was such a touching ending too.
A masterpiece of awareness to the love that lives on even after death.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Why Does It Always Rain In Graveyards?
Isn't it amazing looking back
Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023
Isn't it amazing looking back on those years that leave an impression. I so enjoyed reading about your experiences.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in 1972 A New Direction
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