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I have 1266 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5729052 times and 531 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2842 of my 19,636 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2922 votes

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Dealing With Tomorrow Part Eleven

Part Eleven of Twelve: The Mystery Of The Season Of All Hallows Eve It was obvious to Kenneth that by unlocking the door Bridgette had unleashed some...

Dealing With Tomorrow Part Ten

Part Ten of Twelve in a Mystery For The Season Kenneth tried to maintain calm sitting down at the table as his wife set out his dinner. Although he...

Dealing With Tomorrow Part Nine

Part Nine Of Twelve In This Season's Mystery. Kenneth always kept a tool box in the boot of his car as well as a first aid kit and other essential...

Dealing With Tomorrow Part Eight

Part Eight of Twelve of this Seasonal Mystery. After telling the Caretaker that he'd lock up, Kenneth got to work searching through the cabinets of...

Dealing With Tomorrow Part Seven

Part Seven of the Season's Mystery. Bridgette had passed out a figure lying next to her son no longer aware of what was going on, unable to hear the...

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2842 of my comments have received 2922 Great Feedback votes

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What a great place to focus a

Posted on Tue, 24 Jan 2023

What a great place to focus a poem Paul. I like how you end it on a note where the reader has to make up their own mind which way the relationship will go.

Jenny.

 

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Posted in A View of the Hudson

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An apt poem for the I P.

Posted on Tue, 17 Jan 2023

An apt poem for the I P.

These lines did get me thinking:-

gifts anonymous

made privately

to ease distress, 

 

It does depend on the situation. There's nothing worse that finding out you've given money to...

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Posted in For whose benefit …?

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Hi Kurt,

Posted on Tue, 17 Jan 2023

Hi Kurt,

now that would have been another story if the swan had refused to get off. Imagine it flapping its wings around the bus, would have caused absolute chaos, there would have been such mayhem I really don't want to imagine.

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Posted in Extraordinary Experience On The Bus

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Great twist on Tolkien's

Posted on Sun, 15 Jan 2023

Great twist on Tolkien's Middle Earth. How the envy of the Orcs gave rise to their jealousy and left them with so much hatred.

Would love to read more.

Jenny.

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Posted in Argibel The Orc : The Bitter Romantic Chapter 1

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Hi Rhiannon,

Posted on Fri, 13 Jan 2023

Hi Rhiannon,

this was such a special poem of hope as the New Year begins.

Jenny.

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Posted in January (northern hemisphere)

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I couldn't pick out a

Posted on Tue, 17 Jan 2023

I couldn't pick out a favourite stanza, just loved this poem from beginning to end Paul.

Those starlings are so magical to watch too.

Jenny.

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Posted in The Great and Secret Show

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I'm with Jack too. Although I

Posted on Mon, 09 Jan 2023

I'm with Jack too. Although I like the idea of being in charge, for me it comes with too many challenges and responsibility. I hope Archibald can cope and doesn't have too many anxieties...after all there are leaders and followers, and Archibald...

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Posted in The Fall and Rise of...Archibald Thurble?

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A poem can say so much, and

Posted on Mon, 09 Jan 2023

A poem can say so much, and you've captured that essence Rhiannon. Great idea for the I P too.

Jenny.  

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Posted in 1949

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This is such a beautiful,

Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023

This is such a beautiful, haunting story Paul. It was such a touching ending too. 

A masterpiece of awareness to the love that lives on even after death.

Jenny.

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Posted in Why Does It Always Rain In Graveyards?

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Isn't it amazing looking back

Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023

Isn't it amazing looking back on those years that leave an impression. I so enjoyed reading about your experiences.

Jenny.

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Posted in 1972 A New Direction

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