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Oh dear! Poor Archibald
Posted on Tue, 05 Jul 2022
Oh dear! Poor Archibald really hasn't got a clue. I did laugh out loud at the message he left on the phone, even though I know it must have been such a shock. But even though he's so insufferable, it's hard to be mad at Archibald because he's so...
You've given so much thought to this relationship Jane. I can feel the tension as I read. You've also perfected their impressions of each other, with their different aspirations.
I love the mystery of Sarah, she reminded me of a man I once knew who would walk around the streets of Bristol in the early 1970s. I always remember seeing him on Park Street. He dressed like a tramp with an old torn overcoat fastened at the...
This sounds like quite some escapade Rhiannon. I can imagine when you're young there wouldn't be much of a problem, but your poem describes many obstacles, it must have been a demanding trail to follow, but at least you had some great views as...
you know a memory just came to me of when I was working for an animal feed company down at Avonmouth Docks. It was for a company called BOCM Silcocks back in the early 1970s. I worked in an office with ten other people. We...
Oh dear! Poor Archibald
Posted on Tue, 05 Jul 2022
Oh dear! Poor Archibald really hasn't got a clue. I did laugh out loud at the message he left on the phone, even though I know it must have been such a shock. But even though he's so insufferable, it's hard to be mad at Archibald because he's so...
Read full commentPosted in "Is There Anybody There...?"
You've given so much thought
Posted on Tue, 05 Jul 2022
You've given so much thought to this relationship Jane. I can feel the tension as I read. You've also perfected their impressions of each other, with their different aspirations.
Looking forward to reading more.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in S T Vasectomy Clinic - 18
I love the mystery of Sarah,
Posted on Tue, 05 Jul 2022
I love the mystery of Sarah, she reminded me of a man I once knew who would walk around the streets of Bristol in the early 1970s. I always remember seeing him on Park Street. He dressed like a tramp with an old torn overcoat fastened at the...
Read full commentPosted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part Two of Three)
This sounds like quite some
Posted on Tue, 05 Jul 2022
This sounds like quite some escapade Rhiannon. I can imagine when you're young there wouldn't be much of a problem, but your poem describes many obstacles, it must have been a demanding trail to follow, but at least you had some great views as...
Read full commentPosted in Going on a Way-hunt!
Hi Paul,
Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022
So! I wonder what happened to little Bobby Weaver. Woods are always a great start to a good story. I look forward to finding out more.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part One of Three)
I really hope things go okay
Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022
I really hope things go okay for you Jean. You've had such a tough time lately, you deserve a break.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Chemo
This poem has such a soft and
Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022
This poem has such a soft and gentle flow Rachel, makes me think of peace and quiet in the early morning as the sun just starts to rise.
Beautifully done.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Goldenrod and Wild Aster
Hello again Di,
Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2022
Hello again Di,
you know a memory just came to me of when I was working for an animal feed company down at Avonmouth Docks. It was for a company called BOCM Silcocks back in the early 1970s. I worked in an office with ten other people. We...
Read full commentPosted in rage, rage against the Dying of your Rights
Love your showing of this
Posted on Fri, 01 Jul 2022
Love your showing of this tale in your poem Paul.. Especially like the lines:
So she fled into the cover of forest,
where roe doeer skirted past trees,
wolves howled at midnight moons
and shadows danced in the gloom,...
Read full commentPosted in Snow White
Thid poem is so eye catching,
Posted on Thu, 30 Jun 2022
Thid poem is so eye catching, it makes me feel like I've been on a walk with you. Especially loved the lines:
At road's turn down to the beach, shade spread wide
trees wait to welcome, rubble path cobbling
clay's slicky...
Read full commentPosted in green serene thoughts
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