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Just a bit of fun. Susie the Zebra had been led to her brother's enclosure to join him while her domain was being cleaned out, much to her annoyance...
Date 21 st July 2016 Dear Diary... After living through the hell of Tuesday's hottest day, I was so reassured that today had cooled down slightly and...
Watching spiders eagerly scurry, garden full of nature's agile life; they don't see me... food's their only worry. Me! A cast off of Spring drowning...
Your writing shows you want the best for Mary. You've created a young teenager with lost dreams, but someone who doesn't give up, but strives to make the best out of her situation. I like how she even surprises herself at times.
You've captured so much of the natural beauty in your photos with this poem Rhiannon. I can imagine the patchwork display of the Shropshire hills, and your lilting rhythm of the river's tumbling sound must have been so healing.
Hello Di, you know with a little help from the fairies we've managed to keep the garden fairly wild and free. But as I get on in age it becomes harder to cope. It was kind of you to notice the connection between the garden and woman kind. I will...
I'm so glad Mary's found a friend in Chad, it's what she needs right now. I like how she's got her priorities right, paying the electric bill is so important, she's so grown up for her age, and to think it was Ethan that got her the job is so...
It touched my emotions reading your voice for the dolphin. In fact not just the dolphin, but also the many other creatures that have been displaced. Some humans just don't seen to realize the damage they're doing, it's a real heart breaker. ...
Still reading and enjoying.
Posted on Sun, 20 Nov 2022
Still reading and enjoying.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 16
Your writing shows you want
Posted on Sat, 19 Nov 2022
Your writing shows you want the best for Mary. You've created a young teenager with lost dreams, but someone who doesn't give up, but strives to make the best out of her situation. I like how she even surprises herself at times.
Keep the...
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 15
You've captured so much of
Posted on Sat, 19 Nov 2022
You've captured so much of the natural beauty in your photos with this poem Rhiannon. I can imagine the patchwork display of the Shropshire hills, and your lilting rhythm of the river's tumbling sound must have been so healing.
Such a...
Read full commentPosted in by Craven Arms
You do have a way to go yet
Posted on Sun, 20 Nov 2022
You do have a way to go yet Jean, but you always manage to keep your spirits up somehow, and for that I commend your strong spirit.
Hope you can surround yourself with love and happiness, so that the time will go by quickly. I wish for...
Read full commentPosted in Chemo 15
Such s visual scene capturing
Posted on Sun, 20 Nov 2022
Such s visual scene capturing what is seen, not only through a child's eyes, but also the writer's too.
I loved:-
cradled in my arms, legs dangle below,
my daughter carried on gasps of cold air,
roaming through flora...
Read full commentPosted in Memories from Falls Past
Hello Di, you know with a
Posted on Thu, 17 Nov 2022
Hello Di, you know with a little help from the fairies we've managed to keep the garden fairly wild and free. But as I get on in age it becomes harder to cope. It was kind of you to notice the connection between the garden and woman kind. I will...
Read full commentPosted in To A Brand New Day
I'm with you in your poem
Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2022
I'm with you in your poem Jane, in my old age go getting is something I'll leave to the young. Now I like to sit back and take life easy.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Life is for the Go Getters
I'm so glad Mary's found a
Posted on Thu, 17 Nov 2022
I'm so glad Mary's found a friend in Chad, it's what she needs right now. I like how she's got her priorities right, paying the electric bill is so important, she's so grown up for her age, and to think it was Ethan that got her the job is so...
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 14
I can't begin to understand
Posted on Mon, 14 Nov 2022
I can't begin to understand what's happened to their mother, which is what makes this story so intriguing. Looking forward to reading next part.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 12
It touched my emotions
Posted on Mon, 14 Nov 2022
It touched my emotions reading your voice for the dolphin. In fact not just the dolphin, but also the many other creatures that have been displaced. Some humans just don't seen to realize the damage they're doing, it's a real heart breaker. ...
Read full commentPosted in at bay
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