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Dear Diary...clock ticks as I type wondering where all the time has gone contemplating my options to have a hip replacement, but I don't know why It'...
Another great instalment where nothing ever seems to go to plan for Amber and Lawrence. I also thought the dream sequence of D.S. Stone at the beginning was so funny, but could imagine quite a nightmare for him.
After reading of your exhausting nights on that ward, I consider how lucky I was when I went in for my hip operation. It must also be so annoying to feel you get one problem sorted out, then another shows up and you're back to square one. ...
your information is most helpful, I only wish I had a partner who knows about computers, but sadly he's less knowledgeable than myself and never uses the computer...people must think we live off grid.
Thank goodness for your daughter and her strength in not feeling afraid to speak up. It's so scary to think that there's to be a waiting list of 78 weeks to be seen at the Neurology hospital.
What a beautiful vision you've created in this poem. I was transported by your words, which is so great as I don't like to travel far these days. You brought back my own past memories of special days out.
just love your countryside rambles. This was one of the more tougher description of the conditions you found yourself in, and crunching through the deep snow was related well in this poem. It must have been hard to walk, but...
Hi Paul,
Posted on Mon, 10 Apr 2023
Hi Paul,
you capture the endless memories of that tragic event perfectly. I've only ever seen the film with Di Caprio in and found it to be a real tear-jerker.
It's of value that you've written such an expressive poem and kept the...
Read full commentPosted in A Night to Remember
Some great use of metaphors
Posted on Mon, 10 Apr 2023
Some great use of metaphors in this poem Rhiannon, especially;
Like a chrysalis, bud breaks
shoot bursts out like a butterfly.
Such a wonderful image portrayed.
Enjpyed.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Graceful Uplifting
Another great instalment
Posted on Fri, 07 Apr 2023
Another great instalment where nothing ever seems to go to plan for Amber and Lawrence. I also thought the dream sequence of D.S. Stone at the beginning was so funny, but could imagine quite a nightmare for him.
Please keep the story...
Read full commentPosted in Morning Has Broken (Bring Out Your Dead series - Part 12)
This is such a beautiful
Posted on Sun, 09 Apr 2023
This is such a beautiful image in words, and the picture sets the poem off perfectly.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Bluebell Woods
After reading of your
Posted on Sat, 08 Apr 2023
After reading of your exhausting nights on that ward, I consider how lucky I was when I went in for my hip operation. It must also be so annoying to feel you get one problem sorted out, then another shows up and you're back to square one. ...
Read full commentPosted in Bitty Bsarbie Boob part 3
Good morning Di,
Posted on Tue, 04 Apr 2023
Good morning Di,
your information is most helpful, I only wish I had a partner who knows about computers, but sadly he's less knowledgeable than myself and never uses the computer...people must think we live off grid.
I don't ever...
Read full commentPosted in Relaxed Day In Summer
Thank goodness for your
Posted on Fri, 07 Apr 2023
Thank goodness for your daughter and her strength in not feeling afraid to speak up. It's so scary to think that there's to be a waiting list of 78 weeks to be seen at the Neurology hospital.
The NHS seem to be under so much pressure,...
Read full commentPosted in Bitty Barby Boob RIP part 2
Dear Jean, I'm so sorry to
Posted on Thu, 06 Apr 2023
Dear Jean, I'm so sorry to hear you've been through such an awful ordeal. It must have been so scary, yet your writing conveys how well you cope.
It's devastating and frightening to imagine how the hospital could be so negligent as to...
Read full commentPosted in BITTY BARBY BOOB, RIP
What a beautiful vision you
Posted on Sat, 23 Jun 2012
What a beautiful vision you've created in this poem. I was transported by your words, which is so great as I don't like to travel far these days. You brought back my own past memories of special days out.
Many thanks for sharing.
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Read full commentPosted in Walking on the Dyke, above Knighton
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Tue, 26 Mar 2013
Hi Rhiannon,
just love your countryside rambles. This was one of the more tougher description of the conditions you found yourself in, and crunching through the deep snow was related well in this poem. It must have been hard to walk, but...
Read full commentPosted in To‘bottom’ing, at Caer* Caradoc (23:3:13)
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