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Dear Diary...clock ticks as I type wondering where all the time has gone contemplating my options to have a hip replacement, but I don't know why It'...
They who were hooked on skin, those willing souls awakening a challenge regardless of pain, upon a dare reaching for greater ideas where art slumbers...
Mum! At forefront of my mind, fighting for light, a blazon of memories emanate, combing strands of recollections, plaiting each thread of thought, a...
It was lovely to read your poem Rhiannon, with its touch of seasonal colour.
Although it's cold, our garden daffodils have been out for nearly two weeks, they look a bit forlorn at 7am, but soon lift their heads as the day progresses. I've...
Forbidding is the word that springs to mind when I think of Molloch. Poor Alexander was so right to be cautious. This part gave me goosebumps at what's emerging.
"It's just like the Mystery Machine," Archibald said, happily, bouncing in his seat with excitement as they pulled out of the car lot, "I feel like Scooby-Doo!"
I could just visulize the scene of this flowery vehicle, and Archibald loving...
A very sad account of how a
Posted on Tue, 14 Mar 2023
A very sad account of how a poor woman suffered so badly. Your poem said it all.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Newes From The Dead
Oh dear! Poor Alexander, can
Posted on Wed, 15 Mar 2023
Oh dear! Poor Alexander, can circumstances get any worse for him?
I know I've said it before, but I'm loving your storytelling.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Red Bicycle 17-18
It was lovely to read your
Posted on Wed, 15 Mar 2023
It was lovely to read your poem Rhiannon, with its touch of seasonal colour.
Although it's cold, our garden daffodils have been out for nearly two weeks, they look a bit forlorn at 7am, but soon lift their heads as the day progresses. I've...
Read full commentPosted in A few early wild daffodils in the woods
This story keeps getting
Posted on Tue, 14 Mar 2023
This story keeps getting better and better. Perhaps I'm naive, but I have no idea where the story's going.
Brilliant writing as always. Can't wait to read more.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Red Bicycle 15-16
Forbidding is the word that
Posted on Mon, 13 Mar 2023
Forbidding is the word that springs to mind when I think of Molloch. Poor Alexander was so right to be cautious. This part gave me goosebumps at what's emerging.
Can't wait to read more.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Red Bicycle 13-14
Just catching up with your
Posted on Fri, 10 Mar 2023
Just catching up with your engrossing story. On to next part with anticipation.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Red Bicycle 11-12
For once it was the children
Posted on Fri, 10 Mar 2023
For once it was the children who were wise. I was so glad they found the ring, poor Ned must have been so distressed at being arrested.
A good lesson to learn here, is not to jump to conclusions.
Well told Hilary.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Garden of Songbird Charm Part Two
I'm so glad I came across
Posted on Fri, 10 Mar 2023
I'm so glad I came across your story Hilary, it's so full of beautiful nature, and your descriptions are like a painting with words.
On to next part.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Garden of Songbird Charm
"It's just like the Mystery
Posted on Thu, 09 Mar 2023
"It's just like the Mystery Machine," Archibald said, happily, bouncing in his seat with excitement as they pulled out of the car lot, "I feel like Scooby-Doo!"
I could just visulize the scene of this flowery vehicle, and Archibald loving...
Read full commentPosted in "Oh!" (Bring Out Your Dead series - Part 8)
This poem is absolutely
Posted on Fri, 10 Mar 2023
This poem is absolutely stunning Paul. Your metaphors are spot on, letting the poem come alive.
One of my favourites of yours and thank you for sharing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Spring Skies (After the Dogs of Winter)
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