Nature's blues

By Rhiannonw

Wed, 26 Jul 2023
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Kingfisher blue
has a shimmering hue
but the blueberry’s dark
and dull, no spark.
[IP: include a colour, and animal and a fruit]

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Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Very clever little IP response Rhiannon - thank you!

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

thank you. I have had a few little things in odd moments in the nights, and wondered whether to put them in as a group, or one be one! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by marandina on

"Kingfisher blue

has a shimmering hue..

A visual vignette loaded with colour. So much said in so few words. Nicely done, Rhiannon. Paul 

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Oh, thank you, Paul. It's nice to know such a little one is pleasing. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

They say it's not the quantity but the quality that counts. I just love the idea of the Kingfisher blue with its shimmering hue, and blueberries too.

Nicely done Rhiannon.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Jenny. I have a couple more brief ones emerging! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Turlough on

A blue bird and a blueberry in a nutshell. Lovely!

I'm looking forward to seeing the others you've written.

Turlough

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

thank you! Rhiannon