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I have 1266 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5803399 times and 531 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2842 of my 19,636 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2922 votes

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Promises Beyond The Veil Of Light ( PT 23 )

Picture by Pixabay free images. Part Twenty Three The morning that Mina was to visit the solicitor arrived. Evie had got Mina's coat dry cleaned and...

Promises Beyond The Veil Of Light ( PT 22 )

Picture by pixabay free images. Part Twenty Two Two days after Mina was discovered most people had returned to their normal lives. Evie had spoken to...

Seduced By September

Image by pixabay free images. August finally closes door spindly legs crawl across floor, with no camouflage to cover his tracks this waste ground...
Cherry

Promises Beyond The Veil Of Light ( Pt 21 )

Picture by pixabay free images. Part Twenty One Feeling safe for the first time since she'd left the veiled forest, It was still difficult for Mina...
Cherry

Promises Beyond The Veil Of Light ( PT 20 )

Picture by Pixabay free images. A Story In Forty Eight Parts. Part Twenty Kendrick awoke in the backseat of his vehicle squinting, dazzled by lights...

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2842 of my comments have received 2922 Great Feedback votes

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That wonderful feeling of a

Posted on Fri, 08 Sep 2023

That wonderful feeling of a clear night sky, feeling like you are part of the universe is described perfectly in your poem Richard.

Jenny.

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Posted in Look-Look UP

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Archibald trying to describe

Posted on Fri, 08 Sep 2023

Archibald trying to describe what a bonk was, gave me a smile. smiley He really has a...

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Posted in Sailing (Bring Out Your Dead series - Part 34)

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Some great descriptions in

Posted on Thu, 07 Sep 2023

Some great descriptions in this poem Rhiannon. I like how you capture the drama in the first stanza, then the calm in the second. 

Also love the lines:-

water rippling, sunlight stippling;

here and there the river babbling,...

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Posted in Moods of Ocean and River

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Wow! This is a wonderful

Posted on Tue, 05 Sep 2023

Wow! This is a wonderful nature poem Richard. I love all that you convey.

Well deserved cherries too.

Jenny

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Posted in Another World

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Hi Rhiannon, What a lovely

Posted on Tue, 05 Sep 2023

Hi Rhiannon, What a lovely setting for your poem. Loved the lines:-

Burbling song 

resounding around the dome

bubbling erupting exultantly

two little lungs breathe in, pour out

in synchronous duet

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Posted in Birdsong: Listen!

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Well done on achieving a

Posted on Sat, 02 Sep 2023

Well done on achieving a great I. P. poem Rhiannon. I honestly wouldn't know where to start.

Jenny.

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Posted in The sounds of rain

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Hi Rachel,

Posted on Thu, 31 Aug 2023

Hi Rachel,

sorry to sound naive, your poem was so impressive, but I wasn''t sure of the message in it. Is it about not wanting to look back on younger days? I felt a mixture of sadness blended with mistrust...yet also some fond times too...

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Posted in The First Sorrow

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This is such a sad reflective

Posted on Fri, 01 Sep 2023

This is such a sad reflective poem Turlough. It's always hard to put in to words how we feel about someone special we have known, but you've created such a wonderful personal memory here.

Memories are the one thing no one can take away. ...

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Posted in You Never Said

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I wonder how long it will be

Posted on Thu, 31 Aug 2023

I wonder how long it will be before Archibald spills the beans! I can see Chantelle has her suspicions about Amber and the dead body.

As always look forward to finding out more.

Jenny.

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Posted in Lying Eyes (Bring Out Your Dead series - Part 33)

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Hi Turlough,

Posted on Wed, 30 Aug 2023

Hi Turlough,

apparently a young girl saw me eventually, she came running down the beach and asked me what was wrong. When I told her, the girl said she'd go and get the vet, the vets was luckily enough just up off the beach...thank...

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Posted in Feathers Without Hope

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