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Picture by Pixabay free images. Part Twenty Three The morning that Mina was to visit the solicitor arrived. Evie had got Mina's coat dry cleaned and...
Picture by pixabay free images. Part Twenty Two Two days after Mina was discovered most people had returned to their normal lives. Evie had spoken to...
Picture by Pixabay free images. A Story In Forty Eight Parts. Part Twenty Kendrick awoke in the backseat of his vehicle squinting, dazzled by lights...
sorry to sound naive, your poem was so impressive, but I wasn''t sure of the message in it. Is it about not wanting to look back on younger days? I felt a mixture of sadness blended with mistrust...yet also some fond times too...
This is such a sad reflective poem Turlough. It's always hard to put in to words how we feel about someone special we have known, but you've created such a wonderful personal memory here.
Memories are the one thing no one can take away. ...
apparently a young girl saw me eventually, she came running down the beach and asked me what was wrong. When I told her, the girl said she'd go and get the vet, the vets was luckily enough just up off the beach...thank...
That wonderful feeling of a
Posted on Fri, 08 Sep 2023
That wonderful feeling of a clear night sky, feeling like you are part of the universe is described perfectly in your poem Richard.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Look-Look UP
Archibald trying to describe
Posted on Fri, 08 Sep 2023
Archibald trying to describe what a bonk was, gave me a smile.
He really has a...
Read full commentPosted in Sailing (Bring Out Your Dead series - Part 34)
Some great descriptions in
Posted on Thu, 07 Sep 2023
Some great descriptions in this poem Rhiannon. I like how you capture the drama in the first stanza, then the calm in the second.
Also love the lines:-
water rippling, sunlight stippling;
here and there the river babbling,...
Read full commentPosted in Moods of Ocean and River
Wow! This is a wonderful
Posted on Tue, 05 Sep 2023
Wow! This is a wonderful nature poem Richard. I love all that you convey.
Well deserved cherries too.
Jenny
Read full commentPosted in Another World
Hi Rhiannon, What a lovely
Posted on Tue, 05 Sep 2023
Hi Rhiannon, What a lovely setting for your poem. Loved the lines:-
Burbling song
resounding around the dome
bubbling erupting exultantly
two little lungs breathe in, pour out
in synchronous duet
...
Read full commentPosted in Birdsong: Listen!
Well done on achieving a
Posted on Sat, 02 Sep 2023
Well done on achieving a great I. P. poem Rhiannon. I honestly wouldn't know where to start.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The sounds of rain
Hi Rachel,
Posted on Thu, 31 Aug 2023
Hi Rachel,
sorry to sound naive, your poem was so impressive, but I wasn''t sure of the message in it. Is it about not wanting to look back on younger days? I felt a mixture of sadness blended with mistrust...yet also some fond times too...
Read full commentPosted in The First Sorrow
This is such a sad reflective
Posted on Fri, 01 Sep 2023
This is such a sad reflective poem Turlough. It's always hard to put in to words how we feel about someone special we have known, but you've created such a wonderful personal memory here.
Memories are the one thing no one can take away. ...
Read full commentPosted in You Never Said
I wonder how long it will be
Posted on Thu, 31 Aug 2023
I wonder how long it will be before Archibald spills the beans! I can see Chantelle has her suspicions about Amber and the dead body.
As always look forward to finding out more.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Lying Eyes (Bring Out Your Dead series - Part 33)
Hi Turlough,
Posted on Wed, 30 Aug 2023
Hi Turlough,
apparently a young girl saw me eventually, she came running down the beach and asked me what was wrong. When I told her, the girl said she'd go and get the vet, the vets was luckily enough just up off the beach...thank...
Read full commentPosted in Feathers Without Hope
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