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and 17 of my stories have been cherry picked. 28 of my 2,449 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 27 votes
28 of my comments have received 27 Great Feedback votes
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I love the idea behind this
Posted on Thu, 20 Oct 2011
I love the idea behind this story - it's very good indeed - but I think that you could structure it very differently. Take a look at some of Roald Dahl's short horror stories and see what I mean. We need to feel how Anthony feels, to be taken along...Read full comment
Good story, well told.
A few comments though.
First of all this too long to be read on a computer in one go. I suggest that you re-post it chapter by chapter - you will get a lot more readers.
Secondly, it is littered with spelling and...Read full comment
I love the idea behind this
Posted on Thu, 20 Oct 2011
I love the idea behind this story - it's very good indeed - but I think that you could structure it very differently. Take a look at some of Roald Dahl's short horror stories and see what I mean. We need to feel how Anthony feels, to be taken along...Read full commentPosted in AK Anvil
Good story, well told. A few
Posted on Mon, 04 Jul 2011
Good story, well told. A few comments though. First of all this too long to be read on a computer in one go. I suggest that you re-post it chapter by chapter - you will get a lot more readers. Secondly, it is littered with spelling and...Read full commentPosted in NAUGHTY BUT NICE?: an éclair to die for. Full Version
A very late cherry is
Posted on Sat, 09 Oct 2010
A very late cherry is awarded!Read full commentPosted in If she were on vacation..
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