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Michael, this was, don't want to exaggerate, like sitting on a chair on the corner of the history. I never thought I can feel this way after reading a real scenario script. Real deal
Agree with Philip, isolation, lost in the middle of modern society, hard to reach, to accept, to understand. Very often I live the same drama. Good work!
Agree with torscot, sad story
Posted on Fri, 13 Mar 2015
Agree with torscot, sad story, but i think it is written in such a way you can't dramatize it too much.
Like it, Tina!
Read full commentPosted in In the Cold, Spring Sunlight...
As a star dust being, any
Posted on Sun, 08 Mar 2015
As a star dust being, any stars related poem makes me thrill, but this one got a special touch. Very nice, Tina!
Read full commentPosted in The Nothingness of Stars
There so powerful feelings
Posted on Thu, 05 Mar 2015
There are so powerful feelings behind these lines..., but the ending hides more than history, it's sacred.
Like it!
Read full commentPosted in MORIAH
anxiety, depression..., ended
Posted on Wed, 04 Mar 2015
anxiety, depression..., buried in vodka and tablets. Like!
Good luck for competition!
Read full commentPosted in Deterioration Haiku
Tina, where is that puppet
Posted on Sun, 01 Mar 2015
Tina, where is that puppet story? I really like it, while I was writing the comment the story disappeared.
Read full commentPosted in The Beat Goes On
Michael, this was, don't want
Posted on Tue, 03 Mar 2015
Michael, this was, don't want to exaggerate, like sitting on a chair on the corner of the history. I never thought I can feel this way after reading a real scenario script. Real deal
Read full commentPosted in ALL STEPS NECESSARY (excerpt)
The spirit serenity in outer
Posted on Tue, 03 Mar 2015
The spirit serenity in outer matter realm. Interesting idea.
Like it!
Read full commentPosted in serenity
From my point of view you
Posted on Sun, 01 Mar 2015
From my point of view you already write nicely, about more, this depends on you
Read full commentPosted in I don't want to be bad...
Agree with Philip, isolation,
Posted on Sun, 01 Mar 2015
Agree with Philip, isolation, lost in the middle of modern society, hard to reach, to accept, to understand. Very often I live the same drama. Good work!
Read full commentPosted in Battered Shells
Great love scene, natural
Posted on Sun, 01 Mar 2015
Great love scene, natural innocence, starting in a great environment, ending cold, reality, again.
Read full commentWhat can I say? Great words, baket!
Posted in Nameless
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