The Nothingness of Stars
By Silver Spun Sand
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Hi Tina.
Hi Tina.
This seems to come from a deep and lonely place that only writing such poetry can release. The imagery is stunning and moving at the same time.
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As a star dust being, any
As a star dust being, any stars related poem makes me thrill, but this one got a special touch. Very nice, Tina!
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Hi Tina
Hi Tina
Absolutely beautiful, as your poetry always is. I have trouble sleeping too, and instead of tossing and turning, I now shall think of you, sitting and writing poetry with the stars and moon in the shot-silk sky as your background.
Jean
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Hi Tina,
Hi Tina,
I think it must be a pleasure for you to look at the stars where you live, as I can imagine there are no street lights around. Inspiration comes from being in such beauty.
This poem just reminds me of those nights when it's hard to sleep and to gaze at the night sky if only from a window, gives thought to writing.
Jenny.
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I like the mix of nature with
I like the mix of nature with your personal loss, Tina. The last verse is beautifully sensual and then the sad sharp end..
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