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A topic very close to my

Posted on Mon, 06 Dec 2021

A topic very close to my heart very well elaborated with skilled writing and fine rhyming, highlighting the concern we all feel, Turlough. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

 

Best, Luigi

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Posted in Copse and Robbers

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Not at all, but you don't

Posted on Mon, 31 Aug 2015

Not at all, but you don't want repetition. In the second line you have the word "air" twice and only five words apart. The fourth line has "with every" twice, once again only a few words apart. It may seem petty but these are the things that stop...

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Posted in Chapter 2: Gone (John)

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Came for crying tree stayed

Posted on Mon, 17 Aug 2015

Came for crying tree stayed for hard drugs. 8/8

Welcome to the site, you can't leave.

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Posted in Weeping Willow

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Oh Tina, So heart wrenching, :)

Posted on Thu, 03 Apr 2014

smileyOh Tina, This is such a powerful, beautiful, well expressed poem, yet heart...

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Posted in Today I Wrote a Poem

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Horror

Posted on Sat, 05 Sep 2026

Reviving so many living nightmares, it wasn't easy to write. I almost ticked horror on the list of genres when I was posting it.

Thank you for the cherries.

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Posted in Letters on the Mat

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It's one I always remember

Posted on Mon, 31 Aug 2026

It's one I always remember from animal rights days. I still uphold the principles, but I'm less active now. More involved in the environmental movement generally. It all connects up, though. None of these matters exists in a vacuum, distinct from...

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Posted in Donkey

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Yes, it matters. As Gandhi

Posted on Mon, 31 Aug 2026

Yes, it matters. As Gandhi said: The greatness of a nation and its moral progress can be judged by the way its animals are treated.

I watched a short talk with John Gray earlier, on the fallacy of 'progress'. We don't progress. We just go...

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Posted in Donkey

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You’ve done a wonderful job

Posted on Thu, 27 Aug 2026

You’ve done a wonderful job establishing a quirky, clever, puzzle-box atmosphere. The house feels like an extension of Werlyn’s eccentric mind. Details like the worn carpet pile, the rotary latch hidden as a coat peg, and the cluttered escritoire...

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Posted in Amanderella and the Mystery of the Silent Statue.Chapter 8.

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This is our Pick of the Day, Mon 24th August 2026

Posted on Mon, 24 Aug 2026

  our pick of the day today, thank you for sharing this with us.

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Posted in A Letter To ABC Tales Friends

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This is one area that never

Posted on Tue, 18 Aug 2026

This is one area that never lent itself to privitisation. Water companies represent a monopoly so do not adhere to free market dynamics. The sector really should be returned to public ownership and run for the benefit of all rather than being...

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Posted in Save your Water for The Devil

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