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A topic very close to my

Posted on Mon, 06 Dec 2021

A topic very close to my heart very well elaborated with skilled writing and fine rhyming, highlighting the concern we all feel, Turlough. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

 

Best, Luigi

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Posted in Copse and Robbers

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Not at all, but you don't

Posted on Mon, 31 Aug 2015

Not at all, but you don't want repetition. In the second line you have the word "air" twice and only five words apart. The fourth line has "with every" twice, once again only a few words apart. It may seem petty but these are the things that stop...

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Posted in Chapter 2: Gone (John)

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Came for crying tree stayed

Posted on Mon, 17 Aug 2015

Came for crying tree stayed for hard drugs. 8/8

Welcome to the site, you can't leave.

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Posted in Weeping Willow

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Oh Tina, So heart wrenching, :)

Posted on Thu, 03 Apr 2014

smileyOh Tina, This is such a powerful, beautiful, well expressed poem, yet heart...

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Posted in Today I Wrote a Poem

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You’ve done a wonderful job

Posted on Thu, 27 Aug 2026

You’ve done a wonderful job establishing a quirky, clever, puzzle-box atmosphere. The house feels like an extension of Werlyn’s eccentric mind. Details like the worn carpet pile, the rotary latch hidden as a coat peg, and the cluttered escritoire...

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Posted in Amanderella and the Mystery of the Silent Statue.Chapter 8.

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This is our Pick of the Day, Mon 24th August 2026

Posted on Mon, 24 Aug 2026

  our pick of the day today, thank you for sharing this with us.

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Posted in A Letter To ABC Tales Friends

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This is one area that never

Posted on Tue, 18 Aug 2026

This is one area that never lent itself to privitisation. Water companies represent a monopoly so do not adhere to free market dynamics. The sector really should be returned to public ownership and run for the benefit of all rather than being...

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Posted in Save your Water for The Devil

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Many years ago, I sang the

Posted on Tue, 18 Aug 2026

Many years ago, I sang the part of Balthazar in a school production of Amahl and The Night Visitors, by Menotti. In it, the kings are given overnight hospitality just outside Bethlehem, by a poor widow and her crippled son, even though they had...

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Posted in Sojourn In Palestine (Welcome To Palestine!) by Alfred N.Muggins : Part 4

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The title did make me chuckle

Posted on Sat, 15 Aug 2026

The title did make me chuckle, Kat. I've been on my own for quite a while too, apart from the odd brief encounter, and long ago decided that it was by far the best path for me. Apart from anything else, I haven't got the time or energy to deal...

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Posted in Love in the time of Couriers

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Tenuous? Moi?

Posted on Sat, 15 Aug 2026

Tenuous indeed, but deliberately so because our eclipse over here was a bit pathetic. 

The picture is of a kuker. Kukeri are elaborately costumed participants in an ancient Bulgarian pagan ritual designed to scare away evil spirits, bring...

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Posted in Hairy Bob from Heckmondwike

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