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Assorted writers' groups, the odd anthology, occasional readings. Lots of looking out of the window. Hello, and thanks for dropping by.
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Readings of Episodes One and Two of the Pad Life Journals are now available on Sound Cloud: https://soundcloud.com/user-968566758 More to follow!
I really didn't want these
Posted on Sun, 24 May 2015
I really didn't want these three pieces to end, not because I was expecting answers, but because of the quality of the writing and the mystery of the world you have created. The first part was almost too painful to read, with its tormented...
Read full commentPosted in Passing Through - 3/3 - Passing time with no time
You do have a great ability
Posted on Wed, 13 May 2015
You do have a great ability to get inside different heads. Yet again a strong visual sense to this piece, and I really like the insomniac city. I think your previous two segments spoke more strongly to me personally, but that is the beauty of...
Read full commentPosted in A Morning in the Life of Many Ordinary People
The imagery is so wonderful -
Posted on Tue, 12 May 2015
The imagery is so wonderful - 'a capriciousness of white horses' and the moon 'spat from the mouth of a fanfare of clouds'. Mystery and magic. It's great.
Read full commentPosted in Night in the Camargue
I love the detail in this,
Posted on Tue, 12 May 2015
I love the detail in this, the way you gradually reveal the strangeness of the environment, and the way you have built up these two characters and their relationship, so that by the time we start to get an idea of what might be happening we...
Read full commentPosted in Red
Thank you so much for reading
Posted on Tue, 05 May 2015
Thank you so much for reading and commenting - and for the Cherry! Something to treasure when I ring the water company and confess I've lost my stopcock.
Read full commentPosted in A Pillock's Castle
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