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Assorted writers' groups, the odd anthology, occasional readings. Lots of looking out of the window. Hello, and thanks for dropping by.
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Readings of Episodes One and Two of the Pad Life Journals are now available on Sound Cloud: https://soundcloud.com/user-968566758 More to follow!
I really like the way this
Posted on Mon, 29 Aug 2016
I really like the way this explodes the popular view that people on the autistic spectrum 'don't feel' - to begin to understand how or what they feel needs others to consider a totally different way of seeing the world. The lack of support...
Read full commentPosted in MELTDOWN
Wow - great video! I really
Posted on Thu, 25 Aug 2016
Wow - great video! I really enjoyed this, Linda. Lovely rhythm and sense of fun. I hope Carnival goes brilliantly this weekend.
Read full commentPosted in CARNIVAL
I really like the play on
Posted on Tue, 23 Aug 2016
I really like the play on words and the way you describe that overwhelming pull of attraction, even when it is 'wrong'.
Read full commentPosted in Gravity
Very well paced, packed full
Posted on Sun, 21 Aug 2016
Very well paced, packed full of information but not overloading the reader. Particularly like the way the dialogue develops and gives insight into the characters.
Read full commentPosted in The Crimson Wake iv plans are made.
This is great - the sense of
Posted on Fri, 19 Aug 2016
This is great - the sense of unease is beautifully maintained, with Weasley giving the reader shudders and our concern for Kit growing all the time. Excellent cliffhanger ending. Please do keep posting more of this, it's so good.
Read full commentPosted in The Crimson Wake ii the awkward meetings
Nice start to this. I like
Posted on Thu, 18 Aug 2016
Nice start to this. I like the characters and the questions raised by the arrival of the 'cursed' ship. The set up really holds together.
Read full commentPosted in The Crimson Wake i arrival
This brilliant poem is our
Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2016
This brilliant poem is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day! Please share/retweet!
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Read full commentPosted in District Line ( London competition)
Not remotely a bit rubbish,
Posted on Mon, 01 Aug 2016
Not remotely a bit rubbish, but it does feel as though the ideas come tumbling out, and much better that way than the other. In the end we all write for ourselves, or we should, because otherwise it isn't our true voice. You have it harder than...
Read full commentPosted in The Cobbe house ii the Flunky club
Hello! Welcome to ABC Tales.
Posted on Mon, 01 Aug 2016
Hello! Welcome to ABC Tales. I very much liked the rhythm of this, and the contrast between the sound that seemed to be soothing and then became so frightening. It felt like part of something longer - have you got any plans to expand it? ...
Read full commentPosted in 1. The Fear Looming
Lots of strange and
Posted on Tue, 26 Jul 2016
Lots of strange and fantastical things here, with a fluidity between dreams and reality. I was wondering if it might help with the pacing if you used the dialogue to push the story forward - eg if, in the conversation between the narrator and...
Read full commentPosted in The Spectator, chapters 6 and 7
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