Denzella

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I have 266 stories published in 6 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 423803 times and 101 of my stories have been cherry picked.
60 of my 3,192 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 61 votes

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Moya Rooke

I used to have a profile, but it disappeared so I am writing this to bring things up to date.  First off, I love this site so much it has made such a difference to my life.  Now, if I write something and I post it to ABC it will get read by someone and if it's any way decent then it can get read by quite a number of people.  I feel my writing has improved and that is, in the main, because of the help I have received from quite a few people on here.  I don't feel qualified to give in depth feedback although I try to help with the more obvious errors, but I mainly like to encourage people as I feel that is the best way for me to give something back .  

The other reason I feel indebted to this site is the comments people have made about my work has increased my confidence no end.  Before, I would never show anything I had written to anyone other than my husband and his response was always, 'Yes dear, very good.'

So thank you ABC Tales and thank you to all the people who have commented on what I, laughingly,  call, my work.

My stories

Prison - Cell Mates - I.P. A Monologue 1090 words

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Part One - Prison - Cell Mates! A Monologue 1090 words She was beginning to get on my nerves with all her questions. ‘How come they let you out so...
Cherry

Bedtime Drink Re-posted as part of the I.P. My First reading at York

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BEDTIME DRINK! A Monologue 1090 words This was the first reading I did at York So, what you in for? Oh, same as me. What did you use? Poison! Oh, I’...

The Labour Planet - A Working Title - Part Three

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The Labour Planet - A Working Title - Part Three 939 words Re-posted The guard whose belt Jamie had picked up could be seen on a screen high above...
Cherry

The Labour Planet - Working Title - Part Two - 1103 words

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The Labour Planet Part Two 1103 words Once on board Jamie tried to take in his surroundings. After the noise of the crowd it was eerily quiet in this...
Gold cherry

The Labour Planet - A Working Title - First Draft

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The Labour Planet - Part One - First Draft There was complete and utter chaos at the landing strip. Jamie was unsure of what to do next. He needed to...

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