Denzella

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I have 266 stories published in 6 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 427780 times and 101 of my stories have been cherry picked.
60 of my 3,192 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 61 votes

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Moya Rooke

I used to have a profile, but it disappeared so I am writing this to bring things up to date.  First off, I love this site so much it has made such a difference to my life.  Now, if I write something and I post it to ABC it will get read by someone and if it's any way decent then it can get read by quite a number of people.  I feel my writing has improved and that is, in the main, because of the help I have received from quite a few people on here.  I don't feel qualified to give in depth feedback although I try to help with the more obvious errors, but I mainly like to encourage people as I feel that is the best way for me to give something back .  

The other reason I feel indebted to this site is the comments people have made about my work has increased my confidence no end.  Before, I would never show anything I had written to anyone other than my husband and his response was always, 'Yes dear, very good.'

So thank you ABC Tales and thank you to all the people who have commented on what I, laughingly,  call, my work.

My stories

Foster Speaking How May I Help?

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Foster Speaking! How May I Help? 1324 words “Good Morning, Eugenics Electricals. Foster speaking, How may I help? You bought a computer on Saturday...
Cherry

Are we human or are we dancers? I.P.

Are we human or are we dancers? (I.P.) 1172 words Being new to the area, I had joined this dance group hoping I would make some friends. I tried...

Love?

The photo is nothing to do with the poem. I just like it! Love? I bathed in the soft pool of your love. I swam in your sea of tranquillity. I...
Cherry

The Pensioner!

The Pensioner’s Tale! It’s Saturday today, otherwise I would have started but there would be little point. No, not with what I’ve got planned. You...

The Labour Ward! (I.P.)

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The Labour Ward! (I.P.) Lucy and her friend, Amy, burst in from the garden laughing and pushing each other before the two of them disappeared into...

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