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From Marlene's house coming up the road, you get next to the Krugers, pretty white boarded house. They were an elderly couple, originally from Russia...
I don't intend to bore you with all the little frustrations relating to my purchases, but will just mention the big problems. The first of these was...
Our house was 221 11 th Street – a yellow stucco finished house, two bedrooms, a tiny kitchen, a combined living room dining area and a bathroom. But...
What a good poem. I just listened to you reading it - and you really made it sound like a street rap. And such a truism - trying to live up to one's parents' or partner's expectations is very hard work.
The one with Stephen, was no doubt St Paul. What an apt poem for the current situation in Paris. I wonder if any of the plotters had a feeling of guilt once it was all done. The idea of suicide bombers is so awful - that people...
What a lovely poem. It does bring to mind all the emotions that breasts involve - over the years. And your poem is so positive when it might have been full of anguish.
What a beautiful poem - with all the love that you receive and give very carefully appreciated. And what a lovely picture of you with one of your grandchildren? I've had all four of mine these last few days, and although I am...
This story is very good, and deserves to have been read more than it has so far. You probably realised that most of us read people if the people read our work back. Celticman is usually pretty good at reading stories - a lot of...
Hi Rhiannon
Posted on Wed, 16 Dec 2015
Hi Rhiannon
Lovely onomotopeic words - however you spell it. It made me feel drippy and dull.
Jean
Read full commentPosted in A Bleak Interlude
HI Rhiannon
Posted on Sun, 29 Nov 2015
HI Rhiannon
Yes, the tune is very familiar to me too, and singing the hymn instead of just saying it, makes it so much more meaningful, I think.
Jean
Read full commentPosted in People say ‘the grace’ to each other
Hi Bee
Posted on Fri, 27 Nov 2015
Hi Bee
What a good poem. I just listened to you reading it - and you really made it sound like a street rap. And such a truism - trying to live up to one's parents' or partner's expectations is very hard work.
Jean
Read full commentPosted in The Weight On My Back (poetry monthly)
Hi Rhiannon
Posted on Sun, 22 Nov 2015
Hi Rhiannon
Another very worthy effort to bring glory to God.
Jean
Read full commentPosted in Resurrection power
Hi Bee
Posted on Sat, 14 Nov 2015
Hi Bee
This is just lovely. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Jean
Read full commentPosted in 57
Hi Rhiannon
Posted on Sat, 14 Nov 2015
Hi Rhiannon
The one with Stephen, was no doubt St Paul. What an apt poem for the current situation in Paris. I wonder if any of the plotters had a feeling of guilt once it was all done. The idea of suicide bombers is so awful - that people...
Read full commentPosted in Seared Feelings (IP)
Hi Bee
Posted on Fri, 18 Sep 2015
Hi Bee
What a lovely poem. It does bring to mind all the emotions that breasts involve - over the years. And your poem is so positive when it might have been full of anguish.
Jean
Read full commentPosted in Breasts
Hi Rhiannon
Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2011
Hi Rhiannon
What a delightful little poem - full of hidden meaning. I really think it was cleverly done.
Jean
Read full commentPosted in The poor, happy goblin
Hi Bee
Posted on Fri, 21 Aug 2015
Hi Bee
What a beautiful poem - with all the love that you receive and give very carefully appreciated. And what a lovely picture of you with one of your grandchildren? I've had all four of mine these last few days, and although I am...
Read full commentPosted in Unconditional
Hi Simon
Posted on Wed, 01 Jul 2015
Hi Simon
This story is very good, and deserves to have been read more than it has so far. You probably realised that most of us read people if the people read our work back. Celticman is usually pretty good at reading stories - a lot of...
Read full commentPosted in EBOLOWA 3
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