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It wasn't long before The Variations on a Theme that Mr. Elgar wrote with the codes to say who the dedications were for became generally known as the...
Mrs. Elgar confided to me that one of the people who she really expected to be represented in the Variations featuring Mr. Edgar's best friends, was...
I played each of the scales in turn, over and over, and still Mr. Elgar sat at his desk, writing something, and paid no attention to me whatsoever. I...
I hadn't realised this was posted, so am only seeing it now, but I had heard from Bee with her news before. If I can help anyway with the booklet, I will be happy to. She was the person who introduced me to this site, and kept me going...
I was curious to see what writing you did that would go along with your idea of telling about how things were for future civilizations. This an interesting way of telling about the news - getting it second hand from the cat. I...
Very action packed chapter this. And it is very visual - the reader can see it all unfold as if he were watching a film. I like the little details you throw in- like how beautiful the night sky was. I will forever remember how...
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Posted on Wed, 27 Apr 2016
Hi Rhiannon
I love how the names of the flowers as you have used them, make such a lovely picture of spring.
Jean
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Posted on Sun, 24 Apr 2016
Hi Rhiannon
Another strongly worded hymn with such a good melody too.
Jean
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I hadn't realised this was posted, so am only seeing it now, but I had heard from Bee with her news before. If I can help anyway with the booklet, I will be happy to. She was the person who introduced me to this site, and kept me going...
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Posted on Sun, 03 Apr 2016
Hi Rhiannon
I'm going back over your work that I missed out a few weeks ago. This is a good story-poem and gets the message across.
Jean
Read full commentPosted in God spoke, from the beginning (Poetry Monthly)
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Posted on Sat, 09 Apr 2016
Hi Rhiannon
The words fit well to the tune, and get across the message well.
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Posted in Certain Hope Reliable
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Posted on Tue, 26 Mar 2013
Hi Rhiannon
This is lovely - and very poignant.
Jean
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Posted on Mon, 05 Jan 2015
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I was curious to see what writing you did that would go along with your idea of telling about how things were for future civilizations. This an interesting way of telling about the news - getting it second hand from the cat. I...
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Posted on Mon, 27 Jul 2015
Hi Simon
Very action packed chapter this. And it is very visual - the reader can see it all unfold as if he were watching a film. I like the little details you throw in- like how beautiful the night sky was. I will forever remember how...
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Posted on Sat, 25 Jul 2015
HI Simon
The nasty guy was appropriately unpleasant, but believeable. The poor pathetic courier deserved to be found out for his short comings.
Jean
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Posted on Sun, 06 Mar 2016
Hi Rhiannon
I tried singing it to the Christmas song, and found it worked very well.
Jean
Read full commentPosted in Patience, and Moses learning it
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