UKA is closing. Nostalgia about - something to do with memory...and Spring walks. Was a poem I fell asleep in a chair writing... tooo long on and on ..a few polaroid verses here, more prosey .Still to long! but, for the record, Hail! Spring! (08) Comment: "It's a bit boring...." Comment: "I told you I fell asleep writing it!"
It's a great poem. A haunting
Posted on Fri, 08 May 2020
It's a great poem. A haunting, by object - your tour sent chills. Really good!
Read full commentPosted in All the lost places
Very sweet poem. Enjoyed.
Posted on Thu, 07 May 2020
Very sweet poem. Enjoyed.
Read full commentPosted in Defiance - 2
Super!
Posted on Mon, 04 May 2020
Super!
Read full commentPosted in Crooked Timber
This is a very cool love poem
Posted on Sun, 03 May 2020
This is a very cool love poem. Memories do have their own distances - love how you use space in this -those private mirages- to bridge disconnection, very clever, very true, very simply brilliant ending,and lightly done - Wouldn't change a word...
Read full commentPosted in Distance
those shoal less fish...
Posted on Sat, 02 May 2020
those shoal less fish....suspended animation, and those flick book silent movies on repeat - what are those centaurs up to? Questions are arrows of light that sometimes burn out..a sad spin around the galaxy, black swan tour, beautifully written...
Read full commentPosted in A Universe
Lovely read - swan doctors...I've been worried about the birds
Posted on Wed, 22 Apr 2020
on the river for a while...I'm moored by a Coots nest and the birth of 6 healthy little punk scruffs 3 days ago was lovely to see! Papa and Ma brought them over to visit today :) Your poem reminds me... the space for the remembering, borrowing...
Read full commentPosted in I Want To Tell You Things
Lovely to read - will have
Posted on Fri, 17 Apr 2020
Lovely to read - will have another go... Inter(n)ment or interment? I love rocks and stones in a poem...all the elements here...for the remembering, the ending patient and detached enough to feel wise words indeed! The cacoon of a cave poem - all...
Read full commentPosted in The Biology of Caves
Loved the distilled ending -
Posted on Sun, 19 Apr 2020
Loved the distilled ending - beautifully written :)
Read full commentPosted in Juniper Tree
liked this lots -rememberng
Posted on Wed, 27 Feb 2008
liked this lots -rememberng someone remembering -pictured it, nice lead in - :o) may be i've been there tho... maybe i know Ari...liked the teapots -good poem EwanRead full commentPosted in Café Aphrodite
Pages