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Nolan
There's a rainbow in my soul
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And the rainbow never ends
hectic
Posted on Sun, 03 Apr 2022
Good Work Rhiannon! Had a bit hectic weekend I'll read it properly still, it's a lot longer than most of your poem/hymns. Yes "Promised from the beginning" is very appropriate.
Have a wonderful week! Nolan
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Indeed, "worst folly
Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2022
Indeed, "worst folly is this presuming there’s no-one far greater than we", even with all the human rights stuff- who gave us all these supposed rights?
Especially the first stanza is brilliant but both are. Lovely lyrics lovely poetry and...
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insects
Posted on Mon, 14 Mar 2022
I've thought seriously that insects are from outer space to colonise earth, well really just to look at them. Really look. They are definitely alien!! The thing obviously is that they are so tiny we don't really see a threat but that exactly is...
Read full commentPosted in This Cannot Be Our Home
the fountain overflows
Posted on Mon, 14 Feb 2022
The cistern contains, the fountain overflows -William Blake
It's more of a question of slowing down! In the end everything is about love, and music, and beauty- and escaping from your situation and surroundings then at times. The friends I...
Read full commentPosted in Walk With Me
excellent scifi
Posted on Fri, 11 Feb 2022
Really enjoying these stories, excellent scifi you give the imagination free reigns. Very original and creating a whole world, similar to Tolkien with Middle-Earth or Asimov's Robot scifi books. This story is very good it is clever. Obviously...
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great rhyme
Posted on Sun, 13 Feb 2022
In a nutshell !!
Very good Rhiannon, great rhyme-- regular, easy but whithout compulsion or doggerel, attractive and not forced in any way. I have never managed to get it quite right.
Enjoy your week, don't step on snowdrops! &...
Read full commentPosted in Arrival, Departure, Arrival
Zephyr
Posted on Sat, 08 Jan 2022
"Zephyr" is a beautiful word I wonder what the origin is it is not used often. Could be Greek? I know it from the Ford Zephyr a kind of sports car actually a 6 cylinder I think. First we had an Anglia father of the Ford Escorts, yes I was a baby...
Read full commentPosted in On Track With The Seasons
criminal mind
Posted on Fri, 21 Jan 2022
This is good prose Rob, just slightly incoherent maybe also your punctuation is a bit casual. Myself could never understand a criminal mind I knew someone who majored in criminology and psychology that's about it. Sounds very boring. Some guys...
Read full commentPosted in Inside the steel cage
Lovely words Rhiannon!
Posted on Sun, 09 Jan 2022
Lovely words Rhiannon! Very well written this is a lot of work. "Two men look through the same bars, one sees the mud, the other the stars". Can you now attend church again, as before Covid?
Have wonderful day! Nolan &
Read full commentPosted in Certainties for a New Year
student slogan
Posted on Sun, 02 Jan 2022
"In heaven there is no beer, that's why I drink it here".
Of German origin I believe &
Read full commentPosted in Keeping Teeth and Kidneys for Beginners
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