I'd be interested to know if anyone thinks I could I make a longer story and reveal more about these characters? Any other comments gratefully recieved. Thanks for reading.
It's a well-worn concept, but I needed to get down my version for some reason. It started as a differemt story, meant to fit in my collection, but ended up as this instead.
It was nothing. A film of static and streaked images. The woman waited in vain for something to see, for something to make sense. It was definitely...
A re-edit of the previously published story. Have you ever gone out looking for the 'shopper's high'? How many unsatisfied women have searched for that amazing new thing that promises to transform them, in just one easy passing of coin across palm? This is no cosy Christmas excursion. What does the woman really want and who is the stranger? What is the difference between the woman and the stranger? In two parts due to word count limit. Please read the second part too!