penelopecreighton

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I have 5 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 881 times and 6 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1 of my 15 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1 vote

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The Castle Shakes

I'd be interested to know if anyone thinks I could I make a longer story and reveal more about these characters? Any other comments gratefully recieved. Thanks for reading.
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The grandmother

It's a well-worn concept, but I needed to get down my version for some reason. It started as a differemt story, meant to fit in my collection, but ended up as this instead.
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The Shopper (Part 2. Not much left to read..) New edit

It was nothing. A film of static and streaked images. The woman waited in vain for something to see, for something to make sense. It was definitely...
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The Shopper (Part 1) New edit

A re-edit of the previously published story. Have you ever gone out looking for the 'shopper's high'? How many unsatisfied women have searched for that amazing new thing that promises to transform them, in just one easy passing of coin across palm? This is no cosy Christmas excursion. What does the woman really want and who is the stranger? What is the difference between the woman and the stranger? In two parts due to word count limit. Please read the second part too!

The Dancer

A modern fairytale. The girl waits for the man she knows isn't coming.

1 of my comments has received 1 Great Feedback vote

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I found this surprisingly

Posted on Mon, 12 Nov 2018

I found this surprisingly moving. A very convincing character.

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