Petrice

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I have 5 stories published in 0 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3186 times 1 of my 10 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1 vote

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Petrice Davidson

 

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The Murder of Matthew Kilkenny

By Petrice on Fri, 04 May 2018

Flash Fiction
Drama
Story
Certificate PG

The Protest

By Petrice on Sun, 15 Apr 2018

Who are the real terrorists? The theme is judgement and how we compare ourselves to others noting their crimes whilst our go unacknowledged. I hope to receive FB. Does this piece contain 1 coherent idea that flows to a logical conclusion, or is it busy? Many thanks for your comments.
Drama
Story
Certificate PG
1 likes

The Curious Lamentation of Daisy Namatjira

By Petrice on Wed, 11 Apr 2018

SYNOPSIS: This is a story of alienation and reconciliation between two abused women, one Indigenous who help one another to heal from the demons of their past. I have only presented the first part in draft because the scope is longer than the space provided. I would love feedback and if anyone wishes to request the full draft, please email me. Thank you so much!
Drama
Story
Certificate 18

Poem Pimp

By Petrice on Wed, 11 Apr 2018

We shot out of a rusty make-shift Kombi Van in front of the dusty tourist centre, anxious to get our sweaty feet onto some soft green after passing...
Humour
Story
Certificate 15

Yuppy Guppy

By Petrice on Wed, 11 Apr 2018

Hello I don't know how to edit my poetry properly because this is an experiment. I would be delighted with some feedback or some kind of marking tool. Thank you all.
Humour
Poem
Certificate PG

1 of my comments has received 1 Great Feedback vote

1 Vote

Novel

Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018

I really enjoyed this brief short story which had me so intrigued. It has the makings for a novella or similar and I loved the poetic ending but really wanted to know more about the characters. I do hope you write the book, I would buy it.

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