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StoryThe Murder of Matthew Kilkenny Petrice27 years 10 months ago
StoryThe Protest Petrice67 years 10 months ago
StorySilver Daughter paborama67 years 10 months ago
StoryThe Curious Lamentation of Daisy Namatjira Petrice27 years 10 months ago
StoryYuppy Guppy Petrice47 years 10 months ago
StoryPoem Pimp Petrice17 years 10 months ago

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The Protest

Who are the real terrorists? The theme is judgement and how we compare ourselves to others noting their crimes whilst our go unacknowledged. I hope to receive FB. Does this piece contain 1 coherent idea that flows to a logical conclusion, or is it busy? Many thanks for your comments.
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The Curious Lamentation of Daisy Namatjira

SYNOPSIS: This is a story of alienation and reconciliation between two abused women, one Indigenous who help one another to heal from the demons of their past. I have only presented the first part in draft because the scope is longer than the space provided. I would love feedback and if anyone wishes to request the full draft, please email me. Thank you so much!

Poem Pimp

We shot out of a rusty make-shift Kombi Van in front of the dusty tourist centre, anxious to get our sweaty feet onto some soft green after passing...

Yuppy Guppy

Hello I don't know how to edit my poetry properly because this is an experiment. I would be delighted with some feedback or some kind of marking tool. Thank you all.

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Novel

Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018

I really enjoyed this brief short story which had me so intrigued. It has the makings for a novella or similar and I loved the poetic ending but really wanted to know more about the characters. I do hope you write the book, I would buy it.

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