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Light to the Bleakness 2. of series based on old carols
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series].[2.based on the carol, ‘In the bleak mid-winter’ by Christina Rossetti] In the bleak mid-winter all is cold, troubles biting, bitter – Love foretold God is coming bringing light...
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Dog’s Mercury
Emerging through the littered leaves of the woodland floor …
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Emmanuel (= God with us) 1. of series based on old carols
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] [1, based on the carol 'O come, O come, Emmanuel'] O come, O come, Emmanuel, all people need good news – Noël* to give life purpose … Rejoice, Emmanuel has come – the Light to shine for everyone.…
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One of my father’s carvings
Relaxation from a desk job, one of his hobbies was carving. I think the occasion for this one was probably his parents golden wedding anniversary...
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Potential
Baby growing in the womb destined to die, but not too soon, life to live, to do your bit – who knows now who will benefit when you arrive, contribute...
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I'm not sure if I read this
Posted on Sun, 03 Aug 2014
I'm not sure if I read this before, but if so, I think if so I must have done so too quickly. I have now caught its picture more clearly, and really feel how it has captured much of both worlds quite simply, and effectively.
Read full commentIt reminds me...
Posted in Touring the City
I enjoyed your journey among
Posted on Sat, 26 Jul 2014
I enjoyed your journey among the changing shades. Your spaces are much more vast than in England's farms and countryside, I think.
Read full commentI looked up Leshenaultia, but it seemed to have a 'c' between the 's' and 'h', if I had the right plant....
Posted in Yellow Days
This is very well 'sculpted',
Posted on Wed, 16 Jul 2014
This is very well 'sculpted', Bee, and the interweaving rhymes heighten the flow. So much unsaid, left to the imagination, including what kind of love could lead to such a parting, and the finality of not being able to yet ask that question...
Read full commentPosted in Smiling, Waving and Crying
I liked this very much too.
Posted on Sat, 12 Jul 2014
I liked this very much too. Concise, but not obscure. Actually, I thought that the rhino's horn looks like a pointed bone, so poetic licence! Particularly liked 'Labouring body lumbers' alliteration.
Read full commentand in the last lines...
Posted in Thandi
Well put, Taris. I think I
Posted on Wed, 09 Jul 2014
Well put, Taris. I think I would add that the desire to obey God needs to be there, though if it is really there then there will be a realisation of the need for his help to do so, and for his forgiveness of the constant failings.
Read full commentThere is...
Posted in Burning Bridges
The contrast of escape to the
Posted on Mon, 07 Jul 2014
The contrast of escape to the garden peace, observation and imagination, with the tension of everyday struggles of communications and misunderstandings of relationship interestingly portrayed, Maisie. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in the bench
You leave us with wondering
Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2014
You leave us with wondering about the background to this. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in White Walls Of Hope
This is very touching, real
Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2014
This is very touching, real and vivid. The slow bereavement, the mind swimming about, but not agitated. The brevity and conciseness and form helps. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in For Ann
Some lovely threads, and
Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2014
Some lovely threads, and detail again – so much beauty out there to see and feel, and you share and beckon us to look! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Poetry and That
It is the videoing aspect,
Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2014
It is the videoing aspect, and it would seem the lack of sober trial, and the apparent pleasure and fickleness in accusing and carrying out judgement that is puzzling and shocking. Or am I wrong? Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Crime and Punishment
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