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I agree with the above

Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2015

I agree with the above comments AD1.  You really do a fine job with these sensuous poems.  Cap doffed.

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Posted in Forever frozen on the flipside of the night.

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Yes!

Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2015

I love the depth of feeling that you give us in the last four lines Hayley.  A real confident finish.  I like it!

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Posted in Playground Games

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Philip, someone mentioned

Posted on Mon, 13 Apr 2015

Philip, someone mentioned this as truly excellent - and from your brilliant Icelandic oddysey I think that this is the best I've read.

Absolutely wonderful.  No, actually brilliant.

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Posted in Bathing

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Excellent tibi.

Posted on Thu, 16 Apr 2015

Excellent tibi.  Congratulations on the cherry award too.

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Posted in a red car coming

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Welcome to ABCtales

Posted on Sat, 11 Apr 2015

Not pretentious at all, at least not in my opinion.

It's worth editing though.  there are a few typos that draw unwanted attention.  I thought that you were going to involve the narrator in some level of culpability towards the end.  Maybe...

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Posted in My brother, the murderer.

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Excellent

Posted on Sat, 28 Feb 2015

I've always liked these hard-boiled soviet era thrillers that you do so well ed.  This one as usual did not dissapoint.  Great story telling - impossible not to read in fact.  Love this.

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Posted in Frozen Secrets

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Good.

Posted on Fri, 13 Feb 2015

Good.

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Posted in Nine Months Plus

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Oh yes...

Posted on Fri, 13 Feb 2015

This is proving to be a really excellent collection of poetry indeed. 

I really like the whole thing here, however from the 'Your Daughters, my sons,' line the piece gains further strength and more movement.  Time-shifting effectively in...

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Posted in For S., 8 Poems (7/8)

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I agree.  There is just

Posted on Wed, 11 Feb 2015

I agree.  There is just enough here.  Hypnotic in a way.  And I like the way that the is series unfolding.

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Posted in For S., 8 Poems (3-4)

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