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'My father sighed, “Lillian,

Posted on Thu, 30 Apr 2015

'My father sighed, “Lillian, for fuck’s sake, stop playing with your food and take the dog out.” He poured himself another Jack Daniel’s'.

Best line of prose I've read this week.

I was a little nonplussed at the end when it...

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Posted in Untitled

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I agree with the above

Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2015

I agree with the above comments AD1.  You really do a fine job with these sensuous poems.  Cap doffed.

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Posted in Forever frozen on the flipside of the night.

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Yes!

Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2015

I love the depth of feeling that you give us in the last four lines Hayley.  A real confident finish.  I like it!

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Posted in Playground Games

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Philip, someone mentioned

Posted on Mon, 13 Apr 2015

Philip, someone mentioned this as truly excellent - and from your brilliant Icelandic oddysey I think that this is the best I've read.

Absolutely wonderful.  No, actually brilliant.

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Posted in Bathing

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Excellent tibi.

Posted on Thu, 16 Apr 2015

Excellent tibi.  Congratulations on the cherry award too.

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Posted in a red car coming

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Welcome to ABCtales

Posted on Sat, 11 Apr 2015

Not pretentious at all, at least not in my opinion.

It's worth editing though.  there are a few typos that draw unwanted attention.  I thought that you were going to involve the narrator in some level of culpability towards the end.  Maybe...

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Posted in My brother, the murderer.

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Excellent

Posted on Sat, 28 Feb 2015

I've always liked these hard-boiled soviet era thrillers that you do so well ed.  This one as usual did not dissapoint.  Great story telling - impossible not to read in fact.  Love this.

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Posted in Frozen Secrets

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Good.

Posted on Fri, 13 Feb 2015

Good.

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Posted in Nine Months Plus

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Oh yes...

Posted on Fri, 13 Feb 2015

This is proving to be a really excellent collection of poetry indeed. 

I really like the whole thing here, however from the 'Your Daughters, my sons,' line the piece gains further strength and more movement.  Time-shifting effectively in...

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Posted in For S., 8 Poems (7/8)

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