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Excellent.  Now get your

Posted on Wed, 11 Dec 2013

Excellent.  Now get your sleeves rolled up, start writing and get stuck in!

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Posted in Cat-Omen

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"The fresh-faced rookie cop

Posted on Tue, 03 Dec 2013

"The fresh-faced rookie cop edged his polished toe-cap away from the blood oozing out the body at their feet."

There's your first line right there.  Juggle the first paragraph round and make it grab harder.

"The cops...

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Posted in The Rookie

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That is such a simple and

Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2015

That is such a simple and well-observed poem.  Well done.
 

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Posted in Winter

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Welcome to ABCtales

Posted on Mon, 16 Nov 2015

Lovely poem, Marcia.  Thank you for posting it.
 

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Posted in first of ever firsts

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'the number in (of) cars in

Posted on Fri, 30 Oct 2015

'the number in (of) cars in front to five'.

Smooth-as-you-like-writing, Ewan yes   ...

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Posted in A Kindness Wasted

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Welcome to ABCtales.

Posted on Thu, 29 Oct 2015

Hi FREI,

This is a good start.  I like this old man and this life apart from things.  The way you have drawn him invests a character that knows much more and much less than others might give him credit for.  I love his setting and the...

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Posted in The Snowflake Collector – 1: Barely the End of October

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Welcome to ABCtales.

Posted on Sat, 10 Oct 2015

This is a wonderful poem Papa Kologne.  Tremendous build towards the end.  Really well done.

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Posted in CANCER

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Posted on Thu, 08 Oct 2015

smiley

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Posted in Love Struck---------

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Raw brutality renedered in

Posted on Thu, 08 Oct 2015

Raw brutality renedered in unflinching prose, Photon.  A little overwritten in places in my (totally subjective) opinion but I can't fault the conviction.

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Posted in Freedom Flight #1

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A very realistic opening

Posted on Wed, 07 Oct 2015

A very realistic opening scene that commited me to the read well done.  A couple of points to consider:

'the bed eking (leaking?) wires'  'Eking' refers to making something last longer than it might.

'haul himself into a seating (...

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Posted in The Mezzotint Chapter 9 The Mezzotint

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