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"The fresh-faced rookie cop
Posted on Tue, 03 Dec 2013
"The fresh-faced rookie cop edged his polished toe-cap away from the blood oozing out the body at their feet."
There's your first line right there. Juggle the first paragraph round and make it grab harder.
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Welcome to ABCtales.
Posted on Thu, 29 Oct 2015
This is a good start. I like this old man and this life apart from things. The way you have drawn him invests a character that knows much more and much less than others might give him credit for. I love his setting and the...Read full comment