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May she rest in peace.
Posted on Fri, 06 Sep 2013
May she rest in peace.
Read full commentPosted in My mums smile which shone brighter than the sun.
I love it elsie. The
Posted on Mon, 09 Sep 2013
I love it elsie. The formatting is striking and appropriate. Really good job here. I think that there is a tiny typo?:
Read full comment"Rain reponsive (responsive) to"
Posted in Waiting for the Rain
Right, here's my pounds
Posted on Mon, 20 May 2013
Right, here's my pounds worth: If that is the first thing that you have written since you left school then you have got to carry on. Don't stress about anything other than producing more writing like this that you have posted. It's got freshness...Read full commentPosted in Dragged up (1983)
I think this operates very
Posted on Thu, 14 Mar 2013
I think this operates very well on a variety of levels. A great inspiration these stone circles and from a poet's perspective pregnant with potential. You have tapped this potential with skill. I didn't see the first draft (if one was posted, or...Read full commentPosted in Standing Stones
Keep it going.
Posted on Mon, 04 Feb 2013
Keep it going.Read full commentPosted in Achates
Short and sweet Gawain.
Posted on Sun, 27 Jan 2013
Short and sweet Gawain. There's a nice synergy in there which I also like a lot.Read full commentPosted in Changes
A big message on display
Posted on Sun, 04 Nov 2012
A big message on display here and some striking imagery (first two lines of the third stanza and the last two lines of the fifth to cite just two), a minor typo to sort out; 'The earth once stable under (our) feet'. May I suggest hyphenation here...Read full commentPosted in Status of men
We don't need to know that a
Posted on Wed, 18 Apr 2012
We don't need to know that a chair is plastic we can see it anyway. But listen parsons I have read more of it an it's good, no doubt.Read full commentPosted in Abraham Jones - Pt 3
I'm so glad you reviewed
Posted on Fri, 13 Jan 2012
I'm so glad you reviewed this bluejohn, the flow is better and this allows the poetry to perform as it should. Well done.Read full commentPosted in Three years, 1 day
Great stevehawk. Good twist
Posted on Thu, 24 Nov 2011
Great stevehawk. Good twist it kept me honest to the last.Read full commentPosted in Death, of an Alzheimer's Victim
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