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Personal opinion is that the

Posted on Wed, 23 Jul 2014

Personal opinion is that the capitalisation at the start of each line should be reconsidered.  That's my one editing observation out of the way.  

I think that this is a damn fine effort Dan.  Well done.

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Posted in Stopp

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This is really excellent Ed.

Posted on Mon, 21 Jul 2014

This is really excellent Ed.  

The collaging effect of the images as you maybe try the new television out and how you take us to a channel-surfed hell on earth is mesmerising.  

You do come up with some fabulous stuff, this yet but...

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Posted in All That Glitters . . . . .

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The more I've read this the

Posted on Tue, 22 Jul 2014

The more I've read this the better it's got.  Really assured and honest.  Your love for these leviathans is communicated with a graceful, poetic sentiment NOT sentimentality.  Makes the reader feel the same awe, or it does me at least.

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Posted in If souls inhabited machines

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A very interesting take on

Posted on Mon, 21 Jul 2014

A very interesting take on the human condition and asks the One Great Question for which there is no answer unless in blind belief or in the dogma of denial and rejection.  Spirituality or base humanism? You've got a huge amount going on in this...

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Posted in An Angels questioning lament

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8-)

Posted on Sat, 19 Jul 2014

Simple and simply delightful.  That it is simple in no way indicates that it was simple to write.  The simplest things are often the hardest ones too.  I love this edithrose.

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Posted in Reflection in you

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Excellent Taris

Posted on Thu, 10 Jul 2014

Feelings and sentiments powerfully expressed in this really neat poem.  I think that you have used the repetion of 'you weren't in the mood' to very great effect.  Well done to keep with that theme and trend, that show confidence and conviction...

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Posted in That One Phone Call

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8-))

Posted on Wed, 09 Jul 2014

Wish my teachers had been like that instead of being complete fails (apart from one).

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Posted in Creative Minds!!

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Sorry!

Posted on Sun, 06 Jul 2014

Do you mind saying how old you are?  This Jack the Ripper pastiche is excellent by the way.

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Posted in Chapter One: The Old Compton Street Murder

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Only you Lavadis, can write

Posted on Sat, 05 Jul 2014

Only you Lavadis, can write like this.  Brilliant.

An edit to consider?:

"This (is) my childhood dad,” said Daniel"

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Posted in ex - I'm every woman

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Absolutely f*<}|^g brilliant.

Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2014

Absolutely f*<}|^g brilliant.

This is ace.

 

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Posted in The Gonts

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