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Quite!

Posted on Wed, 30 Jul 2014

Quite!

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Posted in Toady of toad hall. (a warning to children)

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Lovely overall images. This

Posted on Thu, 24 Jul 2014

Lovely overall images. This I found less delightfully unctuous than the rest:

"ever so slightly at the edges, and a blackbird

going home to roost, dreams of sleeping"

The italicised words seem less economical and...

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Posted in After the Heat Wave

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Personal opinion is that the

Posted on Wed, 23 Jul 2014

Personal opinion is that the capitalisation at the start of each line should be reconsidered. That's my one editing observation out of the way.

I think that this is a damn fine effort Dan. Well done.

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Posted in Stopp

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This is really excellent Ed.

Posted on Mon, 21 Jul 2014

This is really excellent Ed.

The collaging effect of the images as you maybe try the new television out and how you take us to a channel-surfed hell on earth is mesmerising.

You do come up with some fabulous stuff, this yet but...

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Posted in All That Glitters . . . . .

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The more I've read this the

Posted on Tue, 22 Jul 2014

The more I've read this the better it's got. Really assured and honest. Your love for these leviathans is communicated with a graceful, poetic sentiment NOT sentimentality. Makes the reader feel the same awe, or it does me at least.

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Posted in If souls inhabited machines

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A very interesting take on

Posted on Mon, 21 Jul 2014

A very interesting take on the human condition and asks the One Great Question for which there is no answer unless in blind belief or in the dogma of denial and rejection. Spirituality or base humanism? You've got a huge amount going on in this...

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Posted in An Angels questioning lament

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8-)

Posted on Sat, 19 Jul 2014

Simple and simply delightful. That it is simple in no way indicates that it was simple to write. The simplest things are often the hardest ones too. I love this edithrose.

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Posted in Reflection in you

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Excellent Taris

Posted on Thu, 10 Jul 2014

Feelings and sentiments powerfully expressed in this really neat poem. I think that you have used the repetion of 'you weren't in the mood' to very great effect. Well done to keep with that theme and trend, that show confidence and conviction...

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Posted in That One Phone Call

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