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Personal opinion is that the
Posted on Wed, 23 Jul 2014
Personal opinion is that the capitalisation at the start of each line should be reconsidered. That's my one editing observation out of the way.
I think that this is a damn fine effort Dan. Well done.
Read full commentPosted in Stopp
This is really excellent Ed.
Posted on Mon, 21 Jul 2014
This is really excellent Ed.
The collaging effect of the images as you maybe try the new television out and how you take us to a channel-surfed hell on earth is mesmerising.
You do come up with some fabulous stuff, this yet but...
Read full commentPosted in All That Glitters . . . . .
The more I've read this the
Posted on Tue, 22 Jul 2014
The more I've read this the better it's got. Really assured and honest. Your love for these leviathans is communicated with a graceful, poetic sentiment NOT sentimentality. Makes the reader feel the same awe, or it does me at least.
Read full commentPosted in If souls inhabited machines
A very interesting take on
Posted on Mon, 21 Jul 2014
A very interesting take on the human condition and asks the One Great Question for which there is no answer unless in blind belief or in the dogma of denial and rejection. Spirituality or base humanism? You've got a huge amount going on in this...
Read full commentPosted in An Angels questioning lament
8-)
Posted on Sat, 19 Jul 2014
Simple and simply delightful. That it is simple in no way indicates that it was simple to write. The simplest things are often the hardest ones too. I love this edithrose.
Read full commentPosted in Reflection in you
Excellent Taris
Posted on Thu, 10 Jul 2014
Feelings and sentiments powerfully expressed in this really neat poem. I think that you have used the repetion of 'you weren't in the mood' to very great effect. Well done to keep with that theme and trend, that show confidence and conviction...
Read full commentPosted in That One Phone Call
8-))
Posted on Wed, 09 Jul 2014
Wish my teachers had been like that instead of being complete fails (apart from one).
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Sorry!
Posted on Sun, 06 Jul 2014
Do you mind saying how old you are? This Jack the Ripper pastiche is excellent by the way.
Read full commentPosted in Chapter One: The Old Compton Street Murder
Only you Lavadis, can write
Posted on Sat, 05 Jul 2014
Only you Lavadis, can write like this. Brilliant.
An edit to consider?:
"This (is) my childhood dad,” said Daniel"
Read full commentPosted in ex - I'm every woman
Absolutely f*<}|^g brilliant.
Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2014
Absolutely f*<}|^g brilliant.
This is ace.
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