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Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2014

Awful first memory.  So sorry.

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Posted in Walking Thru Shards Of Glass

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Lol!  Good one Mr.  A couple

Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2014

Lol!  Good one Mr.  A couple of typos need your attention:

 

"Hes (He's) late they cry."

"She Walk (walks) in a strop."

"Dinners (Dinner's / Dinner is) on the table" (although it works as it appears in the poem)....

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Posted in Running Late

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Top Quality

Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2014

Ed, this is really excellent.  The claustrophobia of the murder scene at the end is incredible.  A convincing voice too.  The themes of I'll gotten gains, disloyalty, the thickness of thieves and revenge takes a leap off the screen.  Well done....

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Posted in X-Ray and I

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;-))

Posted on Sat, 21 Jun 2014

So delicately written Richard.  This whole series has been a joy to read, keep them coming.

"stretched it out as far as they (it) would go"

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Posted in The Dragon of Nottingham - The Beach Recordings - Part One

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Excellent

Posted on Thu, 19 Jun 2014

Very good poem here Tina.  I love the undercurrent of bitterness that I taste and the unbirthed scream that seems to be biding its time.  Wonderful.

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Posted in No Fairy-Tale – This

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Hello Omar!

Posted on Wed, 18 Jun 2014

Ok you said that you would value some feedback?  First off, I would caution you against telling people that they can be 'brutal' it can and often does cause the recipient more pain than gain.  I am not going to be brutal, there is never any need...

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Posted in Into Darkness: Chapter 1, Section(s) 5 & 6

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That is absolutely brilliant.

Posted on Sat, 14 Jun 2014

That is absolutely brilliant.  

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Posted in Boxes, bags, and butterflies

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Welcome

Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2014

Honest and heartfelt.  I guess that only someone who's been through only truly knows what it's like.

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Posted in Uncovered In Recovery

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<(8-))

Posted on Fri, 13 Jun 2014

There y' go.

ps don't ever bullshit me with the 'I never leave Glasgee, York's far too far y'ken' shite ever again.

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Posted in Unbounders Away

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Good Feedback

Posted on Thu, 12 Jun 2014

Excellent feedback from magicdarer and I can see that edit suggestion from Bee has been acted on.  I think that it was the right alteration to make.

I have read this a number of times and my admiration has grown over time.  The themes and...

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Posted in Pretty Wings

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