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Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2014
Ed, this is really excellent. The claustrophobia of the murder scene at the end is incredible. A convincing voice too. The themes of I'll gotten gains, disloyalty, the thickness of thieves and revenge takes a leap off the screen. Well done....
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Posted on Sat, 21 Jun 2014
So delicately written Richard. This whole series has been a joy to read, keep them coming.
"stretched it out as far as they (it) would go"
Read full commentPosted in The Dragon of Nottingham - The Beach Recordings - Part One
Excellent
Posted on Thu, 19 Jun 2014
Very good poem here Tina. I love the undercurrent of bitterness that I taste and the unbirthed scream that seems to be biding its time. Wonderful.
Read full commentPosted in No Fairy-Tale – This
Hello Omar!
Posted on Wed, 18 Jun 2014
Ok you said that you would value some feedback? First off, I would caution you against telling people that they can be 'brutal' it can and often does cause the recipient more pain than gain. I am not going to be brutal, there is never any need...
Read full commentPosted in Into Darkness: Chapter 1, Section(s) 5 & 6
That is absolutely brilliant.
Posted on Sat, 14 Jun 2014
That is absolutely brilliant.
Read full commentPosted in Boxes, bags, and butterflies
Welcome
Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2014
Honest and heartfelt. I guess that only someone who's been through only truly knows what it's like.
Read full commentPosted in Uncovered In Recovery
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Posted on Fri, 13 Jun 2014
There y' go.
ps don't ever bullshit me with the 'I never leave Glasgee, York's far too far y'ken' shite ever again.
Read full commentPosted in Unbounders Away
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Posted on Thu, 12 Jun 2014
Excellent feedback from magicdarer and I can see that edit suggestion from Bee has been acted on. I think that it was the right alteration to make.
I have read this a number of times and my admiration has grown over time. The themes and...
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Posted on Wed, 11 Jun 2014
What can I say?
Read full commentPosted in The Bloody Spikes
Justified Anger
Posted on Wed, 11 Jun 2014
So totally agree with this AD1. I said somewhere else that every single one of those spikes is this country's shameless equivalent of an African blood diamond. What has this country been brought to. It is an utter, unmitigated DISGRACE.
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