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Welcome

Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2014

Honest and heartfelt.  I guess that only someone who's been through only truly knows what it's like.

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Posted in Uncovered In Recovery

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<(8-))

Posted on Fri, 13 Jun 2014

There y' go.

ps don't ever bullshit me with the 'I never leave Glasgee, York's far too far y'ken' shite ever again.

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Posted in Unbounders Away

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Good Feedback

Posted on Thu, 12 Jun 2014

Excellent feedback from magicdarer and I can see that edit suggestion from Bee has been acted on.  I think that it was the right alteration to make.

I have read this a number of times and my admiration has grown over time.  The themes and...

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Posted in Pretty Wings

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8**(

Posted on Wed, 11 Jun 2014

What can I say?

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Posted in The Bloody Spikes

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Justified Anger

Posted on Wed, 11 Jun 2014

So totally agree with this AD1.  I said somewhere else that every single one of those spikes is this country's shameless equivalent of an African blood diamond.  What has this country been brought to.  It is an utter, unmitigated DISGRACE.

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Posted in The Bloody Spikes

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Wow!

Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2014

That is powerful.  The raw emotion tumbles out of it like the rocks out of the back of that lorry.  Odd that we both should touch on the theme of hypocrisy but approach it in different ways and different genres.  Conviction oozes out from this...

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Posted in Crime and Punishment

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Superb!

Posted on Fri, 06 Jun 2014

This gets better and better as it progresses.  So many good things could be said about this one paul_a.  But I'll just leave it at that.  Well done.

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Posted in Just Add Egg

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A pacey and well written piece.

Posted on Sun, 01 Jun 2014

Some typos to edit out.  Here's one to start with:

"She could almost taste the Warnick’s Advocat (Warninks Advocaat)."

and:

"I though (thought) chanting was supposed to chillax you?

This is...

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Posted in The Joke

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Little typos markle:

Posted on Wed, 21 May 2014

Little typos markle:

"But wheat (what) my teacher always aimed for"

"and we (?) other good teachers also came with us"

"Yes, we sand (sang) cheery"

This is lovely prose and your gentle yet assured writing style makes...

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Posted in A Guide

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The last three stanzas are

Posted on Thu, 22 May 2014

The last three stanzas are the money shot of this charming poem.  Well done.

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Posted in spellbound

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