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Hello Tina. Not easy to
Posted on Wed, 01 Jan 2014
Hello Tina. Not easy to comment on a poem of this depth. I was going to play it safe and stick to praising its technicalities but sod it.
This is an immensely affecting piece of poetry and your ability to put these together without ...
Read full commentPosted in Six Years On...
Hi Amy and welcome to
Posted on Sat, 28 Dec 2013
Hi Amy and welcome to ABCtales. This seems genuine and heartfelt, it has a simplicity about it too which I like. Just a couple of points if I may?
"Walking down that eisle (aisle) ina (in a) white dress with my fathers (Father's) arm...
Read full commentPosted in Shop Window
Well done Skyler. I'm not a
Posted on Fri, 27 Dec 2013
Well done Skyler. I'm not a fan of fan-fiction but you managed to write a piece that has a lot going for it. The dramatic tension of being an 'outsider' having to conform to a hostile world is one of the stronger aspects of the piece. A few...
Read full commentPosted in Arcane Chapter 1
Very good set of haikus AD1.
Posted on Sun, 22 Dec 2013
Very good set of haikus AD1. I'm very impressed, well done.
Read full commentPosted in sensual haiku sextet set one
A sad indictment indeed. We
Posted on Wed, 18 Dec 2013
A sad indictment indeed. We are as a flock of impotent apathetic sheep. I can hear the bleating as I type.
Read full commentPosted in The Curse of Humans
And that shines through the
Posted on Wed, 11 Dec 2013
And that shines through the prose!
Read full commentPosted in Mabel's Magic
This is so good.
Posted on Sun, 08 Dec 2013
This is so good.
The immediacy of the foreboding and the dread of the encounter between the visitor (grown up child?) and the patient (parent/holocaust survivor possibly?) is effortlessly achieved. The horribly familiar 'it won't be...
Read full commentPosted in Paralysis and release
There's a great rhythm here
Posted on Mon, 25 Nov 2013
There's a great rhythm here Lois. Well done.
Read full commentPosted in The Lie
Some really stand out words,
Posted on Sun, 24 Nov 2013
Some really stand out words, lines, phrases and imagery in this wonderful poem that almost conjures an epic feel on the initial read. Very good indeed and congratulations on the cherry award, it's very much deserved.
Read full commentPosted in Within the Mirrors
A damn fine poem. Welcome to
Posted on Mon, 18 Nov 2013
A damn fine poem. Welcome to ABCtales.
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