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A twist!

Posted on Mon, 17 Aug 2015

That's a killer, unexpected last line!   It threw this erstwhile metaphorical vignette into shockingly stark focus.  

Well done and welcome to ABCtales.

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Posted in Weeping Willow

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The writing's ok.  I like it

Posted on Thu, 13 Aug 2015

The writing's ok.  I like it when you explore the metaphor.  Maybe you could explore the potential for this to become a prose poem.

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Posted in Soft Men Don't Stay

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Nice one.  It's all about

Posted on Fri, 07 Aug 2015

Nice one.  It's all about writing.  Writing  and improving.

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Posted in The Mohair Bear - part one

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This is great AD1 and I'm not

Posted on Sun, 09 Aug 2015

This is great AD1 and I'm not keen on the genre.  It definitely needs a thorough edit but it's SO worth spending the time on.

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Posted in whistle on the Wynd

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Nicely done

Posted on Sat, 08 Aug 2015

This really is very good.  Excellent introspection that serves to draw an intriguing and very interesting character.  Well done.

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Posted in The Path of the Black Cat

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Welcome

Posted on Thu, 09 Jul 2015

A bold rhyme and excellent vocabulary.  Well done.

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Posted in The Person Within Me

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This is our facebook and

Posted on Fri, 26 Jun 2015

This is our facebook and twitter pick of the day!

Get a fantastic reading recommendation every day.

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Posted in 'Brave'

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"in the play of a lonely

Posted on Tue, 23 Jun 2015

"in the play of a lonely child there is room for a whole world 
of angels"

So, so true, Costmary.

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Posted in Persephone’s Memories

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First love hurts vanessa.  

Posted on Tue, 19 May 2015

First love hurts vanessa.  

You captured that perfectly.  Well done.

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Posted in Him

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This is really good!

Posted on Mon, 18 May 2015

This is really good!

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