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I have 88 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 460801 times and 90 of my stories have been cherry picked.
48 of my 2,188 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 50 votes

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Coral Jane

Once upon a time I was an artist living on the beach somewhere in Devon. Since then there have been many changes in my life...

Coral Jane Macpherson 

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Saturday's child

One from the archives, re-written
Cherry

Portrait of an artist, sleeping

remembering a fellow art student from my college days back in the 70's
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Girl by the lake, standing

"Before us stands yesterday" - Ted Hughes: The Crow Above quote doesn't have much to do with this poem - I just liked it.
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Toxic

The problems of involuntary benzodiapine addiction & withdrawals have again hit the news (front page of the Times,1.10.12) prompting me to post this, scribbled in a notebook two years ago...
Cherry

Watching the candle burn

August 6th: one date, different years, distinctive for two members of the same family - one lived a very short time, the other much longer - both imperfect

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48 of my comments have received 50 Great Feedback votes

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Yes, powerful emotions coming

Posted on Tue, 02 Aug 2016

Yes, powerful emotions coming through the poem, culminating in the one word WHY? x

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Posted in Joanie's Poem

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Great...look forward to

Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2016

Great...look forward to reading edited version.  

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Posted in The Cobbe House part i a dark history.

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Good beginning, if a little

Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2016

Good beginning, if a little long, but the mini-cliffhanger ending leaves the reader curious to know what comes next.  Quite a few typos though, so maybe a bit more editing next time...

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Posted in The Cobbe House part i a dark history.

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You've said it all Ewan, and

Posted on Sat, 16 Jul 2016

You've said it all Ewan, and so well.  Thank you.

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Posted in More Trouble Every Day

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Close to home for me, hence

Posted on Tue, 12 Jul 2016

Close to home for me, hence delay in commenting, but I really liked the way it  was written, so much I read it twice.

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Posted in THE BALLAD OF ANNIE GRAY (Poetry Monthly)

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I'm not sure whether you

Posted on Mon, 11 Jul 2016

I'm not sure whether you meant "liqueur" or "liquor" and apostrophe missing from "don't"...but really I'm nit-picking as I liked this a lot.

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Posted in Addicts

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Bang-on.

Posted on Thu, 30 Jun 2016

Bang-on.

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Posted in Boris

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Moody and magnificent.

Posted on Tue, 14 Jun 2016

Moody and magnificent.

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Posted in Something Dead In The Road

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Simply beautiful.  

Posted on Thu, 12 May 2016

Simply beautiful.  

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Posted in Delicate

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Ordinary lives, lived, re

Posted on Thu, 24 Mar 2016

Ordinary lives, lived, re-lived...

Loved this, Tina - read it twice. x

 

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Posted in Spring in Suburbia

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