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2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 460801 times
and 90 of my stories have been cherry picked.
48 of my 2,188 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 50 votes
Yes, powerful emotions coming
Posted on Tue, 02 Aug 2016
Yes, powerful emotions coming through the poem, culminating in the one word WHY? x
Read full commentPosted in Joanie's Poem
Great...look forward to
Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2016
Great...look forward to reading edited version.
Read full commentPosted in The Cobbe House part i a dark history.
Good beginning, if a little
Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2016
Good beginning, if a little long, but the mini-cliffhanger ending leaves the reader curious to know what comes next. Quite a few typos though, so maybe a bit more editing next time...
Read full commentPosted in The Cobbe House part i a dark history.
You've said it all Ewan, and
Posted on Sat, 16 Jul 2016
You've said it all Ewan, and so well. Thank you.
Read full commentPosted in More Trouble Every Day
Close to home for me, hence
Posted on Tue, 12 Jul 2016
Close to home for me, hence delay in commenting, but I really liked the way it was written, so much I read it twice.
Read full commentPosted in THE BALLAD OF ANNIE GRAY (Poetry Monthly)
I'm not sure whether you
Posted on Mon, 11 Jul 2016
I'm not sure whether you meant "liqueur" or "liquor" and apostrophe missing from "don't"...but really I'm nit-picking as I liked this a lot.
Read full commentPosted in Addicts
Bang-on.
Posted on Thu, 30 Jun 2016
Bang-on.
Read full commentPosted in Boris
Moody and magnificent.
Posted on Tue, 14 Jun 2016
Moody and magnificent.
Read full commentPosted in Something Dead In The Road
Simply beautiful.
Posted on Thu, 12 May 2016
Simply beautiful.
Read full commentPosted in Delicate
Ordinary lives, lived, re
Posted on Thu, 24 Mar 2016
Ordinary lives, lived, re-lived...
Loved this, Tina - read it twice. x
Posted in Spring in Suburbia
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