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As Cinnamon was observing the sky, unable to take her eyes off the spectacle above her, she suddenly heard her name in the far distance being called...
As soon as the guard had departed, Gregor gazed in the direction of the entrance, remembering the tunnel where the crystal was hidden. Grinning with...
It was daylight and early morning by the time Gregor and his guards reached the entrance to the Doom Chamber, all appeared to be quiet as the master...
Mark emanates anger which may be liberating for him, but I felt so sorry for Justin who was just trying to be friendly. Mark's had a lot to cope with, tragedy seems to follow him from one place to another by his own failings. It all goes to keep...
Love, love, love Metallica, have all their albums. Seen them live many times, including going all the way to America to see them in Tampa Bay Florida, I was even in their fan club and met James Hetfield back stage at what was once Donnigton in...
I definitley think Mark should have stayed home. I felt for him having been in that situation myself, when certain work colleagues push you to your limits...there's always one ready to push your buttons.
The place in Hong Kong they stayed at, sounds like it must have been an incredible place to visit. Maria's mother might have been put out by not being in charge, but to have all those servants must have made it feel like a holiday...
I'm sure I recall you telling me about your visit here, or it could have been to the White Horse. I'm a bit like you unable to get out much these days, but for some reason this day I felt active enough to walk, but my...
Hey Hades,
Posted on Sat, 10 Jul 2021
Hey Hades,
I'm glad you continued the story on from 31, it was good to read it as one piece of writing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 32
Mark emanates anger which may
Posted on Sat, 10 Jul 2021
Mark emanates anger which may be liberating for him, but I felt so sorry for Justin who was just trying to be friendly. Mark's had a lot to cope with, tragedy seems to follow him from one place to another by his own failings. It all goes to keep...
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 31
There seems to have been so much bad feeling
Posted on Fri, 09 Jul 2021
There seems to have been so much bad feeling, then for trouble to happen in the port with lives taken must have been devastating.
I don't know how Maria's family stayed in China, I would have wanted to return to England as soon as possible...
Read full commentPosted in Maria's Diary 31
Love, love, love Metallica,
Posted on Thu, 08 Jul 2021
Love, love, love Metallica, have all their albums. Seen them live many times, including going all the way to America to see them in Tampa Bay Florida, I was even in their fan club and met James Hetfield back stage at what was once Donnigton in...
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 30
Maria's father was definitely
Posted on Tue, 06 Jul 2021
Maria's father was definitely a fine poet, wish I could write like that, I wonder if he wrote any books of poetry and got them published.
There was a real taste of this place in Maria's diary entry. The description at the beginning, of...
Read full commentPosted in Maria's Diary 30
I definitley think Mark
Posted on Mon, 05 Jul 2021
I definitley think Mark should have stayed home. I felt for him having been in that situation myself, when certain work colleagues push you to your limits...there's always one ready to push your buttons.
Great read as always and keeps me...
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 29
What a lovely story with
Posted on Sat, 03 Jul 2021
What a lovely story with thankfully a happy ending. Very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Small Black Velvety Box
The scene with Nannette in
Posted on Sat, 03 Jul 2021
The scene with Nannette in the car was spine chilling, left me on the edge of my seat, like Paul said, some great action.
You're keeping the storyline going really well.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 28
Hi Jean,
Posted on Fri, 02 Jul 2021
Hi Jean,
The place in Hong Kong they stayed at, sounds like it must have been an incredible place to visit. Maria's mother might have been put out by not being in charge, but to have all those servants must have made it feel like a holiday...
Read full commentPosted in Maria's Diary 29
Hi there Rhiannon,
Posted on Thu, 01 Jul 2021
Hi there Rhiannon,
I'm sure I recall you telling me about your visit here, or it could have been to the White Horse. I'm a bit like you unable to get out much these days, but for some reason this day I felt active enough to walk, but my...
Read full commentPosted in Timeless Wonder
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