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I have 1189 stories published in 6 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2604382 times and 446 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2271 of my 18,196 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2351 votes

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Dwellers of the New World Chapter Twenty ( Pt 6 ) A Binding Agreement

It was hard to hear above the wind, but Addie lifted a special device to his mouth and as he spoke, his voice was loud and clear, reverberating so...

Dwellers of the New World Chapter Twenty ( Pt 5 ) The High Point

As Cinnamon was observing the sky, unable to take her eyes off the spectacle above her, she suddenly heard her name in the far distance being called...

Dwellers of the New World Chapter Twenty ( Pt 4 ) Tracking The Location

A cold wind whistled down from the great forest, sending the fog back out to sea once more, the sun coming out as the sky became clear, leaving the...

Dwellers of the New World Chapter Twenty ( Pt 3 ) The Mystery Unfolds

As soon as the guard had departed, Gregor gazed in the direction of the entrance, remembering the tunnel where the crystal was hidden. Grinning with...
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Dwellers of the New World Chapter Twenty ( Pt 2 ) Back To The Chamber

It was daylight and early morning by the time Gregor and his guards reached the entrance to the Doom Chamber, all appeared to be quiet as the master...
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2271 of my comments have received 2351 Great Feedback votes

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Hey Hades,

Posted on Sat, 10 Jul 2021

Hey Hades,

I'm glad you continued the story on from 31, it was good to read it as one piece of writing.

Jenny.

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Posted in Disenchantment 32

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Mark emanates anger which may

Posted on Sat, 10 Jul 2021

Mark emanates anger which may be liberating for him, but I felt so sorry for Justin who was just trying to be friendly. Mark's had a lot to cope with, tragedy seems to follow him from one place to another by his own failings. It all goes to keep...

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Posted in Disenchantment 31

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There seems to have been so much bad feeling

Posted on Fri, 09 Jul 2021

There seems to have been so much bad feeling, then for trouble to happen in the port with lives taken must have been devastating.

I don't know how Maria's family stayed in China, I would have wanted to return to England as soon as possible...

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Posted in Maria's Diary 31

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Love, love, love Metallica,

Posted on Thu, 08 Jul 2021

Love, love, love Metallica, have all their albums. Seen them live many times, including going all the way to America to see them in Tampa Bay Florida, I was even in their fan club and met James Hetfield back stage at what was once Donnigton in...

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Posted in Disenchantment 30

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Maria's father was definitely

Posted on Tue, 06 Jul 2021

Maria's father was definitely a fine poet, wish I could write like that, I wonder if he wrote any books of poetry and got them published.

There was a real taste of this place in Maria's diary entry. The description at the beginning, of...

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Posted in Maria's Diary 30

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I definitley think Mark

Posted on Mon, 05 Jul 2021

I definitley think Mark should have stayed home. I felt for him having been in that situation myself, when certain work colleagues push you to your limits...there's always one ready to push your buttons.

Great read as always and keeps me...

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Posted in Disenchantment 29

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What a lovely story with

Posted on Sat, 03 Jul 2021

What a lovely story with thankfully a happy ending. Very much enjoyed reading.

Jenny.

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Posted in The Small Black Velvety Box

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The scene with Nannette in

Posted on Sat, 03 Jul 2021

The scene with Nannette in the car was spine chilling, left me on the edge of my seat, like Paul said, some great action. 

You're keeping the storyline going really well.

Jenny.

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Posted in Disenchantment 28

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Hi Jean,

Posted on Fri, 02 Jul 2021

Hi Jean,

The place in Hong Kong they stayed at, sounds like it must have been an incredible place to visit. Maria's mother might have been put out by not being in charge, but to have all those servants must have made it feel like a holiday...

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Posted in Maria's Diary 29

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Hi there Rhiannon,

Posted on Thu, 01 Jul 2021

Hi there Rhiannon,

I'm sure I recall you telling me about your visit here, or it could have been to the White Horse. I'm a bit like you unable to get out much these days, but for some reason this day I felt active enough to walk, but my...

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Posted in Timeless Wonder

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