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The silence within the cave felt so unusual after being surrounded by so many, Varden wondered how Si didn't get lonely, but supposed it was that he...
Ben returned to the ship with the children, where Peco the ship's cook prepared some food for them. Varg ate quietly, still pondering on the fact he'...
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Wonderful to read and I
Posted on Fri, 21 May 2021
Wonderful to read and I enjoyed the other characters too. Penny the donkey must have her hands full with Dylan and Jessica. I just love how you bring these animals to life.
Maria's father was certainly a busy man, it must have been hard for him to take the criticism on his writing and publishing after all the hard work he put in. I hope his book of poetry did better, his poem on the Slavic people was fascinating to...
I like how you connect with the albatross with each stanza, like you feel an affinity with this bird. It must be so sad not to have at least one photo of yourself as a baby or young child to charge memories.
Hi Penny, I have just spent a Sunday afternoon reading all the seven parts to this magical story. It made sense to read it this way, as then I could indulge myself. You have the balance of mystery, magic and reality down perfectly, leaving me...
It sounds like Packam was a special dog, it's always hard to loose a friend, but I'm sure by keeping on writing, his memory will live on in your stories. It's good to be able to keep writing and I think you've done a great job with this story. I...
Wonderful to read and I
Posted on Fri, 21 May 2021
Wonderful to read and I enjoyed the other characters too. Penny the donkey must have her hands full with Dylan and Jessica. I just love how you bring these animals to life.
Cheery read as always.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Baby Love?
Maria's father was certainly
Posted on Fri, 21 May 2021
Maria's father was certainly a busy man, it must have been hard for him to take the criticism on his writing and publishing after all the hard work he put in. I hope his book of poetry did better, his poem on the Slavic people was fascinating to...
Read full commentPosted in Maria's Diary chapters 15 and 16
Hi Rachel,
Posted on Wed, 19 May 2021
Hi Rachel,
I like how you connect with the albatross with each stanza, like you feel an affinity with this bird. It must be so sad not to have at least one photo of yourself as a baby or young child to charge memories.
It's good to...
Read full commentPosted in Wandering Albatross
You've given these little
Posted on Thu, 13 May 2021
You've given these little characters so much appealing charisma, I agree with Di, any child would love to meet them.
Very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Foxed!
What a great original idea
Posted on Mon, 17 May 2021
What a great original idea for the I P, I would never have thought about designing a poem like this around the colour of silver. Nice one.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Elusive Silver
Hi Penny, I have just spent a
Posted on Sat, 15 May 2021
Hi Penny, I have just spent a Sunday afternoon reading all the seven parts to this magical story. It made sense to read it this way, as then I could indulge myself. You have the balance of mystery, magic and reality down perfectly, leaving me...
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 7
It sounds like Packam was a
Posted on Fri, 07 May 2021
It sounds like Packam was a special dog, it's always hard to loose a friend, but I'm sure by keeping on writing, his memory will live on in your stories. It's good to be able to keep writing and I think you've done a great job with this story. I...
Read full commentPosted in Slugs, Snails and Puppy Dog Tales!
Hi Rachel,
Posted on Sun, 09 May 2021
Hi Rachel,
oysters are spawned
in bursts of stardust,
a battle for convergence,
the dwindling chances
of survival, even beneath
a carapace of stone;
it is not erotic, this flavour
of love...
Read full commentPosted in Oyster
I like the structure of this
Posted on Wed, 05 May 2021
I like the structure of this poem Rachel, giving shape and motion as the poem progresses.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Blackpoll warbler
Haunting and mysterious
Posted on Sat, 01 May 2021
Haunting and mysterious Hilary. Just love reading these kind of stories.
Thank you for sharing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Lanterns on the Lake
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