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I love the idea of the story coming from the road itself. I think if old roads could speak, what a story they'd have to tell, of the history behind how it started out and what it then became is like an autobiography, which you described so well...
had to look up on the internet about the Old Man of Coniston, never having heard of it before. Your description gave a sense of understanding about the natural beauty and the wildness which was so inviting.
I've not read any of your work as of yet. But saw your name on line and decided to take a look. I'm so glad I did, because this writing has such a wonderful natural flow. It was a pleasure to be taken on a nature ramble with you.
I too thought this a great I P Rhiannnon. I also think there's a message here, that it's never too late to change our ways, as like love_writing said, in the U turn at the end.
Hi Tina,
Posted on Sat, 14 Nov 2015
Hi Tina,
your skill at explaining going back to rekindle that spark in a relationship, is spot on in this poem.
The emotional feelings of someone getting old, the fear of loosing memory is so sad and is precisely how you explain...
Read full commentPosted in 'Hard-Boiled Wonderland and the End of the World'
Meadows of poppies are such a
Posted on Sun, 08 Nov 2015
Meadows of poppies are such a rare thing to see, so when they appear in your garden, it's such a joy, as is your poem Tina.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Blithe Spirit
I love the idea of the story
Posted on Mon, 19 Oct 2015
I love the idea of the story coming from the road itself. I think if old roads could speak, what a story they'd have to tell, of the history behind how it started out and what it then became is like an autobiography, which you described so well...
Read full commentPosted in My Rise and Fall (I am a road) (Poetry Monthly)
Hi ray,
Posted on Fri, 18 Sep 2015
Hi ray,
Very dramatic and full of mystery. I thought this was great and definitely one to read out loud.
Congrats on the well deserved cherries.
Jenny.
Posted in We Will
Hi Tina,
Posted on Mon, 14 Sep 2015
Hi Tina,
had to look up on the internet about the Old Man of Coniston, never having heard of it before. Your description gave a sense of understanding about the natural beauty and the wildness which was so inviting.
One part puzzled...
Read full commentPosted in 'The Old Man of Coniston'
I've not read any of your
Posted on Tue, 08 Sep 2015
I've not read any of your work as of yet. But saw your name on line and decided to take a look. I'm so glad I did, because this writing has such a wonderful natural flow. It was a pleasure to be taken on a nature ramble with you.
Many...
Read full commentPosted in The Hill.
Beautifully detailed poem
Posted on Tue, 08 Sep 2015
Beautifully detailed poem Tina, with a dreamy quality that entranced me as a reader.
Jenny.
Posted in Pas de Deux for One
Goodness Tina...this is
Posted on Sat, 29 Aug 2015
Goodness Tina...this is crammed full of some wonderful descriptions. I could visualize all those delightful keep sakes within your poem.
A charmed read for sure.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Snap Shot
I too thought this a great I
Posted on Tue, 25 Aug 2015
I too thought this a great I P Rhiannnon. I also think there's a message here, that it's never too late to change our ways, as like love_writing said, in the U turn at the end.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Ultimate Outcome (IP)
Love the idea of Alexander,
Posted on Sun, 23 Aug 2015
Love the idea of Alexander, Kia and Kian becoming one, now they know Kian is alive and have been to his bedroom on the moon...even for a brief moment.
I could see them ploughing through the neon - like rainbows engulfing them. Your...
Read full commentPosted in Chapter 23 Children of the Moon
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