Pas de Deux for One
By Silver Spun Sand
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A gorgeously told conclusion
A gorgeously told conclusion using the medium of dance.
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This is so beautiful. Very
This is so beautiful. Very touching and a lovely conclusion. Only Monet could paint it so well.
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Beautifully detailed poem
Beautifully detailed poem Tina, with a dreamy quality that entranced me as a reader.
Jenny.
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I liked 'see how
I liked 'see how moonlightstrikes his hair – silver streaks that fret the pillow' particularly, and the stars all dying except for the sun, and the willow and skylark to come in the morning, but the past and the future don't become an apology. Rhiannon
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Always things to apologise
Always things to apologise for, but I took it you were thinking of all that was worthwhile and a blessing in past and future? Rhiannon
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This is most beautiful, even
This is most beautiful, even by your high standards, Tina.
'and all there is to be
becomes an apology between
pirouettes,' - so much movement in this piece - this line stands out for how we dance around eachother until that last stunning and sad line -
'its show-stopping crescendo,
a pas de deux
for one.'
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Seriously beautiful writing
Seriously beautiful writing with a delicate touch. Sensitively delivered and so moving.
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