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I have 1186 stories published in 6 collections on the site.
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Dwellers of the New World Chapter Five ( Pt 5 )

Awaking from a deep sleep Luke felt drowsy, his head felt like a led weight,

Dwellers of the New World Chapter Five ( Pt 4 )

Breathing deeply, Luke left the hospital, regret was deeply on his mind.
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State of Mind

It didn't matter that the walls cracked, weaving their inticate patterns like webs,
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His last Verse

Grains of words disorientated... unruly, though sharp the precipice, meagre scholars, a doctrine engrained,

Dwellers of the New World Chapter Five ( Pt 3 )

Max got to bed finally, he was a lot more relaxed, now he'd spoken with the Minister.

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2250 of my comments have received 2330 Great Feedback votes

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An accurate description of

Posted on Thu, 01 Aug 2019

An accurate description of being in bed at night in the silence and darkness and hearing the pounding of your heartbeat. Sometimes if I lay on my side at night I can hear my heart through my pillow, it's a very strange sensation indeed.

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What a wonderful story

Posted on Wed, 31 Jul 2019

What a wonderful story Richard. I was going to ask how Larry found Sheldon, but I noticed you explained in this part. Sheldon was very, very lucky, to think what could have happened if he'd been left out in the wilds for much longer! He was a...

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Posted in Someone's Son Epilogue

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Hello Di,

Posted on Tue, 30 Jul 2019

Hello Di,

it's funny you should mention the painter, I tried to put brush to canvas the other day as I used to paint a lot and wanted to paint an Autumn scene which was the inspiration for this poem, but I just couldn't seem to get down...

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Posted in Autumn's Canvas

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Moments when thoughts and

Posted on Tue, 30 Jul 2019

Moments when thoughts and feelings take hold, needing to capture them if only for a poem or a piece of writing, even when they cause anxiety this can be a form of art.

A though provoking poem which captured my imagination.

Jenny.

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Posted on Tue, 30 Jul 2019

 

You've built up the tension brilliantly in this part Richard. Sheldon's situation and how he's feeling really leaves the reader on edge...well! it left me anxious for the boy.

Jenny.

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Posted in Someone's Son Chapter 18

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Oh dear! Poor Sheldon. I

Posted on Mon, 29 Jul 2019

Oh dear! Poor Sheldon. I think getting lost anywhere is a nightmare and very scary, but now he's in big trouble having hurt himself badly and being alone too.

Jenny.

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Posted in Someone's Son Chapter17

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Sheldon's very brave and I'm

Posted on Mon, 29 Jul 2019

Sheldon's very brave and I'm glad he's been taught well by his dad and Larry. His mum will be frantic when she finds out what he's done.

I'm completely absorbed in your story Richard.

Jenny.

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Posted in Someone's Son Chapter 15

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I'm glad Sheldon has his mum

Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019

I'm glad Sheldon has his mum there to comfort him. It's sad enough when an adult looses someone special, it must be twice as hard for a child.

Hope dad keeps in contact. Well on to next part with anticipation.

Jenny.

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Posted in Someone's Son Chapter 14

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What a happy scene you've

Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019

What a happy scene you've created in this chapter Richard.

On to next part with anticipation.

Jenny.

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Posted in Someone's Son Chapter 13

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I'm glad Sheldon's dad is

Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019

I'm glad Sheldon's dad is back, after the last chapter I thought he'd gone again.

Jenny.

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Posted in Someone's Son Chapter 12

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