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Dwellers of the New World Chapter Six ( Pt 7 ) Enquiring Minds

While the boys sat around talking of the escape, Dawson had other things on his mind.

Dwellers of the New World Chapter Six ( Pt 5 )

Time passed as Dawson slept, his dreams told of nightmare visions...
Cherry

Eden of Dreams

To scale rainbows rising to their peaks, paradise sits on parallel worlds... carried by gentle streams of the visionary mind...

Seeking her Utopia

Like a whirlwind she dances with great merriment, her hair with amber glow cascades taking flight,

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2253 of my comments have received 2333 Great Feedback votes

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Hi Penny,

Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2019

Hi Penny,

I like your poem and the dreamy idea of gazing up and wondering what's out there feeding your imagination.

Jenny.

 

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Posted in Looking up

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Brilliant story Penny and

Posted on Wed, 04 Sep 2019

Brilliant story Penny and right up my street. Can't wait to read more.

Jenny. 

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Posted in "The Trouble with Magical Beings " (A fairytale) Chapter 1

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A clever poem Di, 

Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2019

A clever poem Di, 

I like the idea of us all being stones in the wall and holding each other up, but if one should escape and another follows, the wall could collapse.

like you say, to keep in balance we have to work together with...

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Posted in wall

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Hi Jane,

Posted on Sun, 01 Sep 2019

Hi Jane,

that second stanza was so moving. Especially:-

The gulping sea eternal, my cradle

We watched you ride her curling lips

A very clever metaphor and symbol of how this amazing creature shows to be a gentle giant...

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Posted in Echoes of a Dead Whale

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Definitely a dreamy poem

Posted on Sat, 31 Aug 2019

Definitely a dreamy poem Richard, with a need to write.

Jenny.

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Posted in Wind at My Back

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Di, that's amazing. To think

Posted on Thu, 29 Aug 2019

Di, that's amazing. To think you witnessed that sparrowg in distress, then thankfully it was fine. I'm so glad the poor bird was okay in the end.

I've had to stop feeding the wild birds because certain people in our local magazine have...

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Posted in With Obsidian Eyes

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Sounds like the beginning of

Posted on Tue, 27 Aug 2019

Sounds like the beginning of an interesting story.

Jenny.

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Posted in Love has no boundaries

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What a great idea for the I P

Posted on Thu, 22 Aug 2019

What a great idea for the I P Rhiannon. 

I love the fact they were all strangers when they got on the bus, yet all the commotion had bought them closer.

A fun poem with plenty of rhythm and rhyme.

Very much enjoyed.

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Posted in from the bus' mouth …

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Hi Rhiannon,

Posted on Mon, 19 Aug 2019

Hi Rhiannon,

that poem about I'm nearly three you can't see me, reminded me of when my son was that age and I'd play peep o with him, by putting my hands across my eyes and then opeing them, it would have him giggling so much. You've...

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Posted in KidsSpeak

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I wonder if Kit is right and

Posted on Mon, 19 Aug 2019

I wonder if Kit is right and they're not really in the Mezzanine! But actually dead. Kit is certainly devoted to Sam and will do anything to protect him.

I like how you leave it on a cliff hanger.

Still enjoying.

Jenny.

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Posted in Sam Sawyer Chapter Eighteen

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