VeraClark

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I have 7 stories published in 0 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3588 times and 11 of my stories have been cherry picked.
321 of my 3,326 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 326 votes

321 of my comments have received 326 Great Feedback votes

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Beautiful, Tina. Lots of

Posted on Wed, 11 Mar 2015

Beautiful, Tina. Lots of layers and such fresh perspectives on spring imagery often taken for granted.

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Posted in The Myth of Narcissus

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This is gripping with sharp

Posted on Sat, 28 Feb 2015

This is gripping with sharp detail and feels well researched.

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Posted in Frozen Secrets

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Hi Astolic Girl, welcome to

Posted on Thu, 26 Feb 2015

Hi Astolic Girl, welcome to ABC Tales. Shout if you need any help with anything and look forward to more of your work. The oral style of this traditional Native American piece is lovely.

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Posted in Story Told By An Elder

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Really beautiful

Posted on Fri, 27 Feb 2015

Really beautiful

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Posted in ganja haiku set

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Some lovely detail, here.

Posted on Fri, 20 Feb 2015

Some lovely detail, here.

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Posted in The Untold Story of a Grim Reaper: Chapter 12: Ethel & Julius

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Hi Violet, like the period

Posted on Thu, 19 Feb 2015

Hi Violet, like the period style of this.It's emotive and thoughtful. You could pare that opening sentence right back, it's wordy and impacts on reader understanding.

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Posted in The Untold Story of a Grim Reaper: Chapter 10: Murder Reaper

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This is fun.

Posted on Wed, 18 Feb 2015

This is fun.

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Posted in Eggyman

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Women are shafted either way

Posted on Tue, 17 Feb 2015

Women are shafted either way - mocked for being fat bare faced uggers or blatantly hated for being aesthetically enhanced Barbie. Your view is horridly refreshing - there's no pretence about a revulsion for masked women.Pity or hate sex is the...

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Posted in The death of beauty

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