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Hi Violet, like the period style of this.It's emotive and thoughtful. You could pare that opening sentence right back, it's wordy and impacts on reader understanding.
Women are shafted either way - mocked for being fat bare faced uggers or blatantly hated for being aesthetically enhanced Barbie. Your view is horridly refreshing - there's no pretence about a revulsion for masked women.Pity or hate sex is the...
Really beautiful
Posted on Fri, 27 Feb 2015
Really beautiful
Read full commentPosted in ganja haiku set
Some lovely detail, here.
Posted on Fri, 20 Feb 2015
Some lovely detail, here.
Read full commentPosted in The Untold Story of a Grim Reaper: Chapter 12: Ethel & Julius
Hi Violet, like the period
Posted on Thu, 19 Feb 2015
Hi Violet, like the period style of this.It's emotive and thoughtful. You could pare that opening sentence right back, it's wordy and impacts on reader understanding.
Read full commentPosted in The Untold Story of a Grim Reaper: Chapter 10: Murder Reaper
This is fun.
Posted on Wed, 18 Feb 2015
This is fun.
Read full commentPosted in Eggyman
Women are shafted either way
Posted on Tue, 17 Feb 2015
Women are shafted either way - mocked for being fat bare faced uggers or blatantly hated for being aesthetically enhanced Barbie. Your view is horridly refreshing - there's no pretence about a revulsion for masked women.Pity or hate sex is the...
Read full commentPosted in The death of beauty
Delicately told through lush
Posted on Mon, 16 Feb 2015
Delicately told through lush imagery.
Read full commentPosted in To a Cherry Tree
That house is very telling.
Posted on Fri, 06 Feb 2015
That house is very telling. You can tell a whole history through 'things' and done with your usual finesse
Read full commentPosted in For Sale - Sold as Seen
A very authentic piece that
Posted on Sun, 01 Feb 2015
A very authentic piece that captures the anxiety of so called friendships.
Read full commentPosted in Growing Up
A traditional piece that
Posted on Wed, 04 Feb 2015
A traditional piece that makes the mouth water. Brought Rosetti's 'Goblin Market' to mind.
Read full commentPosted in Orbital (final)
There's a touching simplicity
Posted on Thu, 05 Feb 2015
There's a touching simplicity to your choice of words here. It brings impact and perpetuates the loss of normality sharply. 'Dapple-day' is lush.
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