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Hello Adam, who is this an
Posted on Fri, 13 Mar 2015
Hello Adam, does Angel know this is online. Sounds a very interesting lifestyle.
Hi Astolic Girl, welcome to ABC Tales. Shout if you need any help with anything and look forward to more of your work. The oral style of this traditional Native American piece is lovely.
Hi Violet, like the period style of this.It's emotive and thoughtful. You could pare that opening sentence right back, it's wordy and impacts on reader understanding.
Women are shafted either way - mocked for being fat bare faced uggers or blatantly hated for being aesthetically enhanced Barbie. Your view is horridly refreshing - there's no pretence about a revulsion for masked women.Pity or hate sex is the...
Hello Adam, who is this an
Posted on Fri, 13 Mar 2015
Hello Adam, does Angel know this is online. Sounds a very interesting lifestyle.
Read full commentPosted in ANGEL KELLY-RACE, SEX AND SPIRITUALITY - Part 1
Beautiful, Tina. Lots of
Posted on Wed, 11 Mar 2015
Beautiful, Tina. Lots of layers and such fresh perspectives on spring imagery often taken for granted.
Read full commentPosted in The Myth of Narcissus
You give us eyes and tastes
Posted on Thu, 05 Mar 2015
You give us eyes and tastes of places we know so we can feel them even when we're not there.
Read full commentPosted in Waterloo Sunset
This is gripping with sharp
Posted on Sat, 28 Feb 2015
This is gripping with sharp detail and feels well researched.
Read full commentPosted in Frozen Secrets
Hi Astolic Girl, welcome to
Posted on Thu, 26 Feb 2015
Hi Astolic Girl, welcome to ABC Tales. Shout if you need any help with anything and look forward to more of your work. The oral style of this traditional Native American piece is lovely.
Read full commentPosted in Story Told By An Elder
Really beautiful
Posted on Fri, 27 Feb 2015
Really beautiful
Read full commentPosted in ganja haiku set
Some lovely detail, here.
Posted on Fri, 20 Feb 2015
Some lovely detail, here.
Read full commentPosted in The Untold Story of a Grim Reaper: Chapter 12: Ethel & Julius
Hi Violet, like the period
Posted on Thu, 19 Feb 2015
Hi Violet, like the period style of this.It's emotive and thoughtful. You could pare that opening sentence right back, it's wordy and impacts on reader understanding.
Read full commentPosted in The Untold Story of a Grim Reaper: Chapter 10: Murder Reaper
This is fun.
Posted on Wed, 18 Feb 2015
This is fun.
Read full commentPosted in Eggyman
Women are shafted either way
Posted on Tue, 17 Feb 2015
Women are shafted either way - mocked for being fat bare faced uggers or blatantly hated for being aesthetically enhanced Barbie. Your view is horridly refreshing - there's no pretence about a revulsion for masked women.Pity or hate sex is the...
Read full commentPosted in The death of beauty
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