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Beyond the obvious beauty of
Posted on Wed, 01 Jan 2014
Beyond the obvious beauty of this piece, in trying to comprehend and contextualise pain I simply can't, I was thinking about how powerfully you sustain your daughter's memory in your own code as a matter of course. You make sure that your...
dazza, that eternal wait for the bus, know it well. Liked the conversational tone of this, it sways this way and that. Centre alignment works well. Needs a spell check.
What a beautiful, heartfelt tribute to your mum, Wolverain. Sorry to hear of your mum's passing. I hope writing is helping you express your love and loss.
Hi juliarose, this is an honest, heartfelt piece of writing. All those legal ages bring so many barriers and frustrations, despite their good intentions. Welcome to ABC tales, will look forward to reading more of your work. Your piece just needs...
Beyond the obvious beauty of
Posted on Wed, 01 Jan 2014
Beyond the obvious beauty of this piece, in trying to comprehend and contextualise pain I simply can't, I was thinking about how powerfully you sustain your daughter's memory in your own code as a matter of course. You make sure that your...
Read full commentPosted in Six Years On...
Really liked the concept of
Posted on Fri, 13 Dec 2013
Really liked the concept of this story. Can imagine it happening with all the mobile technology.
Read full commentPosted in Mischief
This is absolutely lovely.
Posted on Sat, 07 Dec 2013
This is absolutely lovely.
Read full commentPosted in From here to there
dazza, that eternal wait for
Posted on Mon, 02 Dec 2013
dazza, that eternal wait for the bus, know it well. Liked the conversational tone of this, it sways this way and that. Centre alignment works well. Needs a spell check.
Read full commentPosted in The second of December twenty thirteen
You're such a persuasive
Posted on Thu, 28 Nov 2013
You're such a persuasive writer, Moya. This describes the self- battle to z's in such a witty, fresh way.
Read full commentPosted in For a Long Time I Went To Bed Early! I.P.
Sea imagery is visual and
Posted on Tue, 22 Oct 2013
Sea imagery is visual and original. Liked this, hope there's more.
Read full commentPosted in Black Sea
What a beautiful, heartfelt
Posted on Fri, 06 Sep 2013
What a beautiful, heartfelt tribute to your mum, Wolverain. Sorry to hear of your mum's passing. I hope writing is helping you express your love and loss.
Read full commentPosted in My mums smile which shone brighter than the sun.
Hi juliarose, this is an
Posted on Sat, 31 Aug 2013
Hi juliarose, this is an honest, heartfelt piece of writing. All those legal ages bring so many barriers and frustrations, despite their good intentions. Welcome to ABC tales, will look forward to reading more of your work. Your piece just needs...
Read full commentPosted in Hurt
I want that sense of
Posted on Sun, 14 Apr 2013
I want that sense of wonderment back! Enchanting tale.Read full commentPosted in Under the Oak – a poet's fable
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