VeraClark

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I have 7 stories published in 0 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3441 times and 11 of my stories have been cherry picked.
321 of my 3,326 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 326 votes

321 of my comments have received 326 Great Feedback votes

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Wise words and wish more

Posted on Sat, 01 Nov 2014

Wise words and wish more people had those morals.

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Posted in The Wrong Side of the Track

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It's startling in beauty. The

Posted on Wed, 29 Oct 2014

It's startling in beauty. The mythical aspects that you draw out from her ageing face, then that egg is such a crushing symbol and you've conveyed loss as a new concept in an ordinary world.

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Posted in She had not aged well

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The crucifix motif is

Posted on Tue, 28 Oct 2014

The crucifix motif is exceptionally powerful as a symbol of lost belief in death. Add to that the warmth of his skin, the location of his home, the shatter of war and you've got agony in palmed hands. An exceptionally strong piece of work on the...

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Posted in The Power and the Glory

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Like the two character's

Posted on Thu, 23 Oct 2014

Like the two character's internal monologues, Lindy - they contrast off each other with humour and you've got the back story in through their stream. You could definitely risk being more offensive and I felt I needed to know who Jake was. I hope...

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Posted in The Past Revisited

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The ghosts convey the

Posted on Mon, 20 Oct 2014

The ghosts convey the unchangeable layering of circumstance delicately and that unshakeable longing to alter, to tweak the scenes that play on repeat in our minds. A multi-faceted lens on the past that feels floaty and semi-permenant in places,...

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Posted in All the Ghosts of Us

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