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The ghosts convey the
Posted on Mon, 20 Oct 2014
The ghosts convey the unchangeable layering of circumstance delicately and that unshakeable longing to alter, to tweak the scenes that play on repeat in our minds. A multi-faceted lens on the past that feels floaty and semi-permenant in places,...
Read full commentPosted in All the Ghosts of Us
Crikey, an unexpected ending.
Posted on Wed, 15 Oct 2014
Crikey, an unexpected ending. Your title has a typo 'beginnings.'
Read full commentPosted in New Beginnings
Disease - cell division came
Posted on Thu, 02 Oct 2014
Disease - cell division came to mind. It's a beauty anyway, Jennifer.
Read full commentPosted in Riddle (2nd October, 2014) – for National Poetry Day
Refreshingly different.
Posted on Wed, 01 Oct 2014
Refreshingly different.
Read full commentPosted in The Ministry of Kisses
Rhythm flows much better now,
Posted on Tue, 30 Sep 2014
Rhythm flows much better now, Bee The speculative element to it resonates after the read, too.
Read full commentPosted in When We Are Changed - (edited)
A beautiful piece. You've
Posted on Sun, 28 Sep 2014
A beautiful piece. You've precisely captured said rawness in the most unusual images, some I'd never associate with grief but now I will.
Read full commentPosted in Rosalind
Gosh, not an easy task with
Posted on Fri, 26 Sep 2014
Gosh, not an easy task with all those conditions. With restraint, as they say.
Read full commentPosted in I Can Do What I Want!
Lindy, I'm a serial starter
Posted on Thu, 25 Sep 2014
Lindy, I'm a serial starter and finish over months in dribs. You can come back to this if it doesn't feel right now - sometimes takes me a year for a 3, 000 word story to settle or solidify before I can even spit it out. Hope you know what I'm...
Read full commentPosted in Another World
Very touching and really felt
Posted on Thu, 25 Sep 2014
Very touching and really felt the brick metaphor, particularly liked how it became a feature of friendship and mere concrete became environmental struggle as well as final struggle.
Read full commentPosted in BRICKS
Yes, got me in the heart. Its
Posted on Wed, 17 Sep 2014
Yes, got me in the heart. Its light touch softens it, but a touch of heavy's allowed. Parental attachment is an emotional abcess and a source of identification that defies all other bonds.
Read full commentPosted in When I Am The Apple of No One's Eye
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