VeraClark
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Laughed wildly at this. It's
Posted on Sat, 13 Sep 2014
Laughed wildly at this. It's absolute truth and your characters are all so real on the page. Never give your ideas away and erm, polite cough-cough, never knock Virginia Woolf. (She's a babe)
Read full commentPosted in I have no sympathy
Fleshly is fab! This is very
Posted on Thu, 11 Sep 2014
Fleshly is fab! This is very resonating - something you don't like to mull over because it grows in stature and it's composed as starkly as industry is.
Read full commentPosted in Saltley Gas Works (Necropolis)
Lots to like. Cuttingly
Posted on Sun, 07 Sep 2014
Lots to like. Cuttingly satisfying. I admire your no nonsense style and it's witty to boot.
Read full commentPosted in Stacey on the Lunch
A lovely intro, its
Posted on Mon, 08 Sep 2014
A lovely intro Lindy, its independent swagger works for me. Consider adding an adjective before 'up to the imposing front door' to clarify that sentence. I'd use 'trickled' but lots would fit.
Whose favourite? Give 'her' a name so that the...
Read full commentPosted in A difference of Opinion
A real fan of your work. You
Posted on Fri, 05 Sep 2014
A real fan of your work. You are very skilled at translating mental health for both those in the know and those that are not, who need showing to gain a perspective of what schizophrenia may mean.
connection missing a 'c'.
This...
Read full commentPosted in The Science of Fiction
This is enjoyable darkness
Posted on Sun, 07 Sep 2014
This is enjoyable darkness Phillip, not too heavy on the emotion with macabre elements that make it very unusual. Agree about cutting the top two. If you start at 'Then there were' - you don't need to introduce the magic lantern because the poem...
Read full commentPosted in Magic Lantern
It isn't easy to capture the
Posted on Mon, 01 Sep 2014
It isn't easy to capture the 'projection' mentality of a perpertrater of DV minimising his actions to his victim but you've got that hateful little voice down really well. I don't like this narrator because I recognise lots of infuriating men's...
Read full commentPosted in SMACK - (edited)
Love this Parson, its
Posted on Sun, 24 Aug 2014
Love this Parson, its strength is in your reader not knowing and that ambivalence lends such possibility. That it is sea bound gave me a shiver, too many unknowns out there. The statemented style brings impact and your visuals are sharp. It...
Read full commentPosted in Event
‘That retro-folk-doggerel
Posted on Wed, 20 Aug 2014
‘That retro-folk-doggerel you recite to people—well, it’s like being fucked up the arse by a nose trumpet,’ is my favourite line.
Adore the symbolic wing trapped in a net, the brilliance dazzling behind concrete walls, the Panopticon of...
Read full commentPosted in The Avondale Ward
What a heart burner of a
Posted on Wed, 20 Aug 2014
What a heart burner of a piece. It's full of love and yet just out of reach.
Read full commentPosted in The day before December 30th
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