VeraClark

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324 of my comments have received 329 Great Feedback votes

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Refreshingly different.

Posted on Wed, 01 Oct 2014

Refreshingly different.

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Posted in The Ministry of Kisses

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Rhythm flows much better now,

Posted on Tue, 30 Sep 2014

Rhythm flows much better now, Bee The speculative element to it resonates after the read, too.

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Posted in When We Are Changed - (edited)

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A beautiful piece. You've

Posted on Sun, 28 Sep 2014

A beautiful piece. You've precisely captured said rawness in the most unusual images, some I'd never associate with grief but now I will. 

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Posted in Rosalind

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Gosh, not an easy task with

Posted on Fri, 26 Sep 2014

Gosh, not an easy task with all those conditions. With restraint, as they say.

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Posted in I Can Do What I Want!

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Lindy, I'm a serial starter

Posted on Thu, 25 Sep 2014

Lindy, I'm a serial starter and finish over months in dribs. You can come back to this if it doesn't feel right now - sometimes takes me a year for a 3, 000 word story to settle or solidify before I can even spit it out. Hope you know what I'm...

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Posted in Another World

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Very touching and really felt

Posted on Thu, 25 Sep 2014

Very touching and really felt the brick metaphor, particularly liked how it became a feature of friendship and mere concrete became environmental struggle as well as final struggle.

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Posted in BRICKS

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Yes, got me in the heart. Its

Posted on Wed, 17 Sep 2014

Yes, got me in the heart. Its light touch softens it, but a touch of heavy's allowed. Parental attachment is an emotional abcess and a source of identification that defies all other bonds.

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Posted in When I Am The Apple of No One's Eye

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Hello Broamalia, this is

Posted on Thu, 18 Sep 2014

Hello Broamalia, this is going well and your description is really considered.Perhaps consider giving the old woman and boy a name so that there isn't too much anonymity along the way.

'leapt' in the last line.

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Posted in Progeniture, Ch. 4

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Hi Stephen, you've asked for

Posted on Wed, 17 Sep 2014

Hi Stephen, you've asked for some feedback - just had a read through your piece. Welcome to ABC firstly. There are some lovely poetic qualities to your prose, particularly the last two paragraphs. The little girl is intriguing and I want to know...

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Posted in Journey

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Intriguing characters and the

Posted on Tue, 16 Sep 2014

Intriguing characters and the dialogue pulls your reader in. You could open with 'She bent to retrieve' and tag your other paragraphs onto the close of last chapter. Keep going.

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Posted in Progeniture, Ch. 3

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