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I liked the colloquial voice,
Posted on Mon, 06 Apr 2015
I liked the colloquial voice, Tina. It's a slice of reality.
This captures lots of strands of being a woman yet it's subtle. Some people despair when I dare to bring gender in to it but there's a sense of two identities here, inner and outer, garden and town, chemical and earth.
How you toy with your reader, frantic just to feel safe and shelter in the uncertain shadows of your dark voice. The civilised city scenes contrast well with your untamed beasts. Implies punitive state control measures and the primitive natures...
Hi Astolic Girl, welcome to ABC Tales. Shout if you need any help with anything and look forward to more of your work. The oral style of this traditional Native American piece is lovely.
I liked the colloquial voice,
Posted on Mon, 06 Apr 2015
I liked the colloquial voice, Tina. It's a slice of reality.
Read full commentPosted in Simmering Sibblings
Vividly terrifying.
Posted on Wed, 01 Apr 2015
Vividly terrifying.
Read full commentPosted in Hollow air
This captures lots of strands
Posted on Thu, 19 Mar 2015
This captures lots of strands of being a woman yet it's subtle. Some people despair when I dare to bring gender in to it but there's a sense of two identities here, inner and outer, garden and town, chemical and earth.
Read full commentPosted in In the Green Time
How you toy with your reader,
Posted on Tue, 17 Mar 2015
How you toy with your reader, frantic just to feel safe and shelter in the uncertain shadows of your dark voice. The civilised city scenes contrast well with your untamed beasts. Implies punitive state control measures and the primitive natures...
Read full commentPosted in Wolf-pack
Dont know how much closer you
Posted on Sat, 14 Mar 2015
Dont know how much closer you want to get it, Tina but it's the best philosophy to have and it feels refined to every word. A wonderful piece.
Read full commentPosted in Camelot
Hello Adam, who is this an
Posted on Fri, 13 Mar 2015
Hello Adam, does Angel know this is online. Sounds a very interesting lifestyle.
Read full commentPosted in ANGEL KELLY-RACE, SEX AND SPIRITUALITY - Part 1
Beautiful, Tina. Lots of
Posted on Wed, 11 Mar 2015
Beautiful, Tina. Lots of layers and such fresh perspectives on spring imagery often taken for granted.
Read full commentPosted in The Myth of Narcissus
This is gripping with sharp
Posted on Sat, 28 Feb 2015
This is gripping with sharp detail and feels well researched.
Read full commentPosted in Frozen Secrets
Hi Astolic Girl, welcome to
Posted on Thu, 26 Feb 2015
Hi Astolic Girl, welcome to ABC Tales. Shout if you need any help with anything and look forward to more of your work. The oral style of this traditional Native American piece is lovely.
Read full commentPosted in Story Told By An Elder
Really beautiful
Posted on Fri, 27 Feb 2015
Really beautiful
Read full commentPosted in ganja haiku set
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