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I liked the colloquial voice,

Posted on Mon, 06 Apr 2015

I liked the colloquial voice, Tina. It's a slice of reality.

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Posted in Simmering Sibblings

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Vividly terrifying.

Posted on Wed, 01 Apr 2015

Vividly terrifying.

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Posted in Hollow air

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This captures lots of strands

Posted on Thu, 19 Mar 2015

This captures lots of strands of being a woman yet it's subtle. Some people despair when I dare to bring gender in to it but there's a sense of two identities here, inner and outer, garden and town, chemical and earth. 

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Posted in In the Green Time

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How you toy with your reader,

Posted on Tue, 17 Mar 2015

How you toy with your reader, frantic just to feel safe and shelter in the uncertain shadows of your dark voice. The civilised city scenes contrast well with your untamed beasts. Implies punitive state control measures and the primitive natures...

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Posted in Wolf-pack

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Dont know how much closer you

Posted on Sat, 14 Mar 2015

Dont know how much closer you want to get it, Tina but it's the best philosophy to have and it feels refined to every word. A wonderful piece.

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Posted in Camelot

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Hello Adam, who is this an

Posted on Fri, 13 Mar 2015

Hello Adam, does Angel know this is online. Sounds a very interesting lifestyle.

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Posted in ANGEL KELLY-RACE, SEX AND SPIRITUALITY - Part 1

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Beautiful, Tina. Lots of

Posted on Wed, 11 Mar 2015

Beautiful, Tina. Lots of layers and such fresh perspectives on spring imagery often taken for granted.

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Posted in The Myth of Narcissus

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This is gripping with sharp

Posted on Sat, 28 Feb 2015

This is gripping with sharp detail and feels well researched.

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Posted in Frozen Secrets

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Hi Astolic Girl, welcome to

Posted on Thu, 26 Feb 2015

Hi Astolic Girl, welcome to ABC Tales. Shout if you need any help with anything and look forward to more of your work. The oral style of this traditional Native American piece is lovely.

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Posted in Story Told By An Elder

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Really beautiful

Posted on Fri, 27 Feb 2015

Really beautiful

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Posted in ganja haiku set

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