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4 of my 59 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 3 votes
4 of my comments have received 3 Great Feedback votes
Good use of the ole "unreliable narrator"
Posted on Thu, 24 Nov 2016
You do a good job of giving an honest glimpse into the mind of someone who is justifying their own actions by blaming the other person. Good job.
A couple of technical notes:
I think you need to keep an eye on your grammar,...
Posted in Alter Ego
Thanks for your feedback!
Posted on Sat, 13 Aug 2016
This is very helpful. Just to clarify, Hazel is not the name of the main character, but the word on the sign she encounters just before discovering the slave chambers. Was that not clear? If not, I'll go back and try to clarify. I guess maybe the...Read full comment
Posted in Hazel
I just joined ABCTales, and I
Posted on Wed, 29 Jul 2015
I just joined ABCTales, and I've learned that it's a UK site. This is demonstrated by this most British piece of writing- I assume the author is British, because no American or Canadian (which I am) could make birdwatching this poetic.
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Posted in Summer Flights