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2268 of my comments have received 2363 Great Feedback votes

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sunshine, showers short, and

Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019

sunshine, showers short, and rainbows,
cuckoo calls and swooping swallows.

fresh and shining shade,
glowing green of woods and glade

How precious a home,
a haven that’s warm

of mosses, saturated, soft;...

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Posted in Through the year month by month

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I love the description

Posted on Wed, 14 Aug 2019

I love the description "withers and fills" . Scrolling back up top to the top of the poem, was surprised how short it is as it is so full of images

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Posted in prairie river flowing

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wow! what a brilliant

Posted on Wed, 14 Aug 2019

wow! what a brilliant wonderful amazing reader you are! I could listen to you reading all day :0) I'm really glad you posted this one! Please do a Craven Danger one with lots of dialogue?

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Posted in Lincoln's Crumpled Paper IP

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Brilliant description of

Posted on Wed, 07 Aug 2019

Brilliant description of incoming tide being "the long push"

"pincered beasts and tube-dwelling tentacled lagoon worms" makes them sound like fantasy monsters :0) I like your contrast of the diferent uses of shells, too. So many details....

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or maybe you outgrew it. Or

Posted on Wed, 31 Jul 2019

or maybe you outgrew it. Or life's lexicon discovered you had been mislabelled all the time

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Posted in Nameless

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"cardinal red

Posted on Thu, 01 Aug 2019

"cardinal red

laced and wired with veins and arteries,

a muscular bomb" this is so vivid!

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Posted in Rubatosis

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I like this more and more

Posted on Wed, 31 Jul 2019

I like this more and more each time I read it. I feel like I am stalking your ideas, though, as there was a flock on the buddleia outside. I don't remember seeing so many before. You convey the feeling of their indomitability/fragility really...

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Posted in Painted Ladies

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You listen to World Service

Posted on Tue, 30 Jul 2019

You listen to World Service too! Sometimes cannot sleep al night and it is comforting listening to them talking, knowing they are al awake too. You have conjured the teetering fragile feeling of being very tired and unable to sleep, like an...

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Posted in 3am

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brilliant! Particularly with

Posted on Mon, 29 Jul 2019

brilliant! Particularly with relation to countries and old conflicts, like an arm breaking free of the ties, flailing around. It makes me think of the world now, the hurts of the past reinforcing present troubles, history growing restless, like...

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Posted in It should be easy to forget

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Oh Jane WOW

Posted on Wed, 03 Jul 2019

Oh Jane WOW

I just read this, can't convey how brilliant sufficiently as don't have time, but WOW

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Posted in A Man Riding the Tube Train

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