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2239 of my comments have received 2323 Great Feedback votes

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"... and good poets make it

Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2019

"... and good poets make it into something better, or at least something different.”

well, you are a good poet :0) This poem seems to me like a display cabinet where you have carefully curated lines by great writers to make the reader...

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Posted in London's Burning

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sounds like you are the true

Posted on Wed, 17 Apr 2019

sounds like you are the true family, remembering him with beauty

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Posted in Crocuses in Spring

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Elsie, so sorry to hear that!

Posted on Fri, 22 Mar 2019

Elsie, so sorry to hear that! Try writing on here? You will get so much support, so many of us have been through this

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Posted in Wild daffodils of field and meadow*

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brilliant!!!

Posted on Fri, 05 Apr 2019

brilliant!!!

I love all the consonants at the beginning and the longer vowels and softer consonants at the end, wish I could write like this! I LOVE  your musical ones :0)

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Posted in Unseasonal Hail!

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loved this one!

Posted on Thu, 04 Apr 2019

loved this one!

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Posted in Joy! Joy! Joy!

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Pansies are amazing, I

Posted on Fri, 29 Mar 2019

Pansies are amazing, I remember trying to draw one once with my new pencils and just going through the paper in the end, trying to get the depth of colour :0)

You highlight how even now purple is special, compared to ubiquitous orange...

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Posted in Colours for Kids 7)

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Posted on Sat, 30 Mar 2019

 

"I’ve got mine and he mustn’t touch.

We don’t like each other very much.

Although we have more or less the same,

I don’t want him to join in my game."

and

"and model soldiers all ready to die.

...

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Posted in BOOM or BUNCO

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 I hope things are better

Posted on Wed, 27 Mar 2019

 I hope things are better soon and you get the job in which you shine and are appreciated and paid what you deserve

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Posted in Putting Things Off

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I do like your adjectives in

Posted on Tue, 26 Mar 2019

I do like your adjectives in these, they make everything you list fun and real. I loved it when it was a fresh piece of paper, all smooth and cool with infinite possibilities of what it could become, and I got to choose, like being an...

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Posted in Colours for Kids 4)

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All natural things in this

Posted on Sat, 23 Mar 2019

All natural things in this one. Clever to think of sun making you brown! I bet that would appeal to a child. And not just gravy, thick gravy :0) And scuttling spiders. What great variety of emotions you evoke here!

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Posted in Kids' Colours 3)

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