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I love your walking poems,
Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2020
I love your walking poems, with their breathing rhythm. But I love this too, the pause of it:
spitting drizzle – growing
heavier, but nearly back at car – see through
the cloudy veil a gleam of sunshine glowing
...
Read full commentPosted in Grey-Day rambling
I'm glad :0)
Posted on Mon, 27 Jan 2020
I'm glad :0)
Yes, I always wanted to see one too, there was something magic about how you never do. Years later Mum's cat caught one, I was suprised how tiny it was! It didn't bite or scratch when I picked it up, just wriggled in a muscly...
Read full commentPosted in Underground
I like this one very much.
Posted on Mon, 27 Jan 2020
I like this one very much. Well, not like, because it is grim. Admire. The idea of earthworms being like memories in the tunnels of your mind and "uncoil of earthworms" is wonderful.
"thoughts concealed
until I forgot the existence...
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This bit, in the middle of
Posted on Mon, 13 Jan 2020
This bit, in the middle of all the trance inducing greenery like a dagger in a soft hand:
every decency,
every abomination is homogenised -
this slavery of a belief
that is the condemnation of the abused.
...
Read full commentPosted in Lime Tree
You evoke a very strong
Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2020
You evoke a very strong feeling of uneasiness:
she will show you
that you are no hunter at all -
you are the little lamb that knows
the cold sharp of terror, that knows you have,
unnoticed,
drifted from...
Read full commentPosted in Wolf moon
I like the idea of willows
Posted on Wed, 08 Jan 2020
I like the idea of willows talking to the moon and hiding nests off moon pearly eggs :0)
Read full commentPosted in There is hope here
I like the waterfall "c"
Posted on Wed, 08 Jan 2020
I like the waterfall "c" sounds, in cleft and cliff and crystal - you didn't need to say the sound as the sight words give it, really clever! The last line, every word seems stressed so it is full of the power of a mass of water.
The woods...
Read full commentPosted in Water-Break-its-Neck, Radnor Forest
beautiful Rhiannon, I
Posted on Thu, 15 Nov 2012
beautiful Rhiannon, I particularly like how you use the form to build images then melt them away. Not just clever but creating emotional impact as well. I particularly like the last stanza with its vital surge in the middle like a wave and then...
Read full commentPosted in Poignant ice tribute to Titanic victims (Belfast, 21/10/12)
Luigi I have lost count of
Posted on Sun, 05 Jan 2020
Luigi I have lost count of the things I have learned from reading your poems. I am glad you got a cherry, you ARE wise, and witty also! No reflection necessary
Read full commentPosted in Reflected Glory
I could not look at the
Posted on Fri, 03 Jan 2020
I could not look at the pictures. You are so brave to have and made this strong message from them. Beautiful but still holding the horror
Read full commentPosted in You can’t cling to something once it has gone.
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