Pine cones scattered waiting motionless, delicate living things, nature's minuscule diving boards that have no springs, upturned becomes shelter for...
Jagged rocks gaze out to sea as monster wave claws its way, imitating huge polar bear easily dipping, rising sinking... needs to eat up miles of sand...
Those yawning summers our parents once knew, left us youngsters with easy energy that was boundless, chasing silent butterflies though diminutive, we...
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Ooh! That last bit sounds
Posted on Fri, 05 Jan 2024
Ooh! That last bit sounds ominous. I wonder what the little man from the car park in Santander wants! Nothing's been running smoothly for them and now this.
What a petrifying story Paul.I can't Imagine a world where people are spiraling out of control and the impending doom that would come. It was a good scary read, but let it stay just on the pages of being a story.
I agree with Turlough, embarking on any new relationship can be a great adventure, discovering new traits about each other, making plans together, and simply having that companion that makes life a better place.
I'm trying to imagine what must be going through Vanessa's mind, to think that Spencer is testing her, is very scary indeed. I hope her logical mind gives her the right judgement on where to go from here.
Your poem was so interesting to read, and it's great to read something new about Witches, I have a particular interest in the Wiccan ways from way back, yet I knew nothing of the Witches Of Long Compton, so you've introduced something new to me...
Ooh! That last bit sounds
Posted on Fri, 05 Jan 2024
Ooh! That last bit sounds ominous. I wonder what the little man from the car park in Santander wants! Nothing's been running smoothly for them and now this.
I just love a cliffhanger. ...
Read full commentPosted in Pick Up The Pieces (Bring Out Your Dead series - Part 49)
A perfectly described example
Posted on Wed, 03 Jan 2024
A perfectly described example of the storm Rhiannon. Hope things your way were not too destructive.
Jenny.
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What a petrifying story Paul
Posted on Wed, 03 Jan 2024
What a petrifying story Paul.I can't Imagine a world where people are spiraling out of control and the impending doom that would come. It was a good scary read, but let it stay just on the pages of being a story.
Jenny.
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I agree with Turlough,
Posted on Tue, 02 Jan 2024
I agree with Turlough, embarking on any new relationship can be a great adventure, discovering new traits about each other, making plans together, and simply having that companion that makes life a better place.
I wish you all the best in...
Read full commentPosted in New year's rant
A significant poem of Hope in
Posted on Mon, 01 Jan 2024
A significant poem of Hope in the New Year. Let the light of 2024 hold many pleasurable hours of writing for you Rhiannon.
Jenny.
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I'm trying to imagine what
Posted on Mon, 01 Jan 2024
I'm trying to imagine what must be going through Vanessa's mind, to think that Spencer is testing her, is very scary indeed. I hope her logical mind gives her the right judgement on where to go from here.
You've really set the scene...
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Your poem was so interesting
Posted on Sat, 30 Dec 2023
Your poem was so interesting to read, and it's great to read something new about Witches, I have a particular interest in the Wiccan ways from way back, yet I knew nothing of the Witches Of Long Compton, so you've introduced something new to me...
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I hope Chantelle can get to
Posted on Fri, 29 Dec 2023
I hope Chantelle can get to Frankie before he's burnt to a cinder. Poor Chantelle must be frantic.
Happy New Year to you Phil.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Burning Love (Bring Out Your Dead series - Part 48)
Hi Phil,
Posted on Sun, 24 Dec 2023
Hi Phil,
I loved the idea of giving the wind, snow and tree a personality. Very creative and a pleasure to read.
Thank you.
Congrats on the well deserved gold cherries.
Jenny.
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I wonder if this defines how
Posted on Sat, 23 Dec 2023
I wonder if this defines how many in the limelight feel.
Great use of the I.P.
Jenny.
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