When tempests batter Down your door, Thieves of pain skulk In secret corners, Their chains rattling Deepest anxieties, Dig deep down To those roots,...
Seems so long ago now, parched as we were in Scorching heat - followed coastal path of Seclusion, quenching thirst I cupped my hands, Reached down to...
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As the sky changes colour
Posted on Wed, 31 Jan 2024
As the sky changes colour with its pallet of pale pink, blue, purple, orange and white, your poem sets the scene in such a way, that seeing those naked branches brings their beauty to life.
What an amazing name Weobley sounds. You've captured the scene again with your descriptive words perfectly. It sounds like you had the perfect day for that walk.
there's such a captivating sense of freedom in your writing, it gives the reader a sense that anything's possible, especially as you were so spontaneous in the planning of this holiday..
I couldn't help feeling fascinated to read about the production line of Hillman Hunters being sold to Iran, and the fact that there was no road tax or purchase tax.
My very first car was a Hillman Imp LRK 608D back in...
we had a gorgeous moon last night, in fact I left the blind up in the kitchen and stood gazing at it for quite a while. Makes me wish that humans didn't mess with nature and its beauty. My star sign of cancer is ruled by the moon...
As the sky changes colour
Posted on Wed, 31 Jan 2024
As the sky changes colour with its pallet of pale pink, blue, purple, orange and white, your poem sets the scene in such a way, that seeing those naked branches brings their beauty to life.
Lovely expressive poem Rhiannon.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in January Skies
Ooh! I wonder if Spencer is
Posted on Wed, 31 Jan 2024
Ooh! I wonder if Spencer is right about Stu, if he is I feel sorry for Pat.
Still enjoying Jane.
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you..Part 17
This story is so endearing
Posted on Sun, 28 Jan 2024
This story is so endearing Penny. I'm loving their adventure and the touch of humour you've created.
Brilliant.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "Unwanted Magic" 3
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Sat, 27 Jan 2024
Hi Rhiannon,
What an amazing name Weobley sounds. You've captured the scene again with your descriptive words perfectly. It sounds like you had the perfect day for that walk.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Above Weobley
Hi Turlough,
Posted on Sat, 27 Jan 2024
Hi Turlough,
there's such a captivating sense of freedom in your writing, it gives the reader a sense that anything's possible, especially as you were so spontaneous in the planning of this holiday..
I laughed ...
Read full commentPosted in The Great Falafel Kerfuffle
A beautiful description of
Posted on Fri, 26 Jan 2024
A beautiful description of transition Paul. Loved that third stanza, but your whole poem captures a winter's scene perfectly.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in After the Snow
Hi Phil,
Posted on Fri, 26 Jan 2024
Hi Phil,
Chantelle trying to wake Frankie by banging her elbow on the coffin had me smiling. ...
Read full commentPosted in Ashes to Ashes (Bring Out Your Dead series - Part 52)
Hi Turlough,
Posted on Thu, 25 Jan 2024
Hi Turlough,
I couldn't help feeling fascinated to read about the production line of Hillman Hunters being sold to Iran, and the fact that there was no road tax or purchase tax.
My very first car was a Hillman Imp LRK 608D back in...
Read full commentPosted in Just Deserts
Hi Paul,
Posted on Thu, 25 Jan 2024
Hi Paul,
we had a gorgeous moon last night, in fact I left the blind up in the kitchen and stood gazing at it for quite a while. Makes me wish that humans didn't mess with nature and its beauty. My star sign of cancer is ruled by the moon...
Read full commentPosted in Silent Mystic
You really captured the
Posted on Tue, 23 Jan 2024
You really captured the conversation around the table, especially the line:-
Pat laughed. 'It's an upside down Tesco delivery crate with metal bits all attatched.'
Very original idea for the instrument I thought. But I don't think...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you..Part 16
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