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Progeniture, Ch. 4

She darted to the left, then stopped suddenly behind another tree, pressing her back against it. Moving silently, she skirted around the trunk as...

Progeniture, Ch. 3

The mat was nearly cleared when the old woman sat up sharply and cocked her head, listening. After a frozen moment she burst into motion, scooping up...

Progeniture, Ch. 2

The old woman's stillness hasn't merely been idleness. She's been intently watching a dark lump, nearly hidden in the deep underbrush about fifty...

Progeniture, Ch. 1

From dappled shadows below the forest’s edge, an ancient woman gazes out across the glowing meadow. She'd spent the whole morning standing motionless...

3 of my comments have received 3 Great Feedback votes

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I also enjoyed this, nice

Posted on Fri, 05 Sep 2014

I also enjoyed this, nice spin on the time paradox thing, and I feel like it does make sense. (Assuming it was a future her that stopped herself from finalizing the solution, thus erasing her own time stream). I have to assume a lot, but it...

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Agreed with all. Very moving

Posted on Wed, 06 Aug 2014

Agreed with all. Very moving and thoughtful. The sense of contracting space as her attention draws inward is amazing.

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Posted in Dust

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evocative line

Posted on Tue, 16 Sep 2014

"Our headstones will be separated by hills." This feels quite lonely... well said.

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Posted in Seperation