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I loved it. Just the sort of stuff I notice walking along, a million things soon forgotten. You captured a moment of some of them. Always will it to win!
It's stunning. What a quietness to it. Words that stop you in your tracks. You've suggested the movement of the wolves with the pace. I like the slight repetition and the making of compound words.
I love this. In a few lines you have given a feeling of plenty - especially in the 2nd and 3rd lines which work so well together - and also good wishes. Enjoy your festivities.
Great comment, Di_Hard! I know what Turlough means though - I love watching paint dry on TV eg Portrait Artist of the Year etc - and I have lots of ideas but not the skill. But writing or art, it should all be about enjoyment, at whatever level...
I'm not sure which country you're in but am guessing Malaysia. This is a really interesting read - past and present meeting up - and in a few lines you give a really stong impression of your father. Thinking of you all.
Very wise - memories are so strong though. I had a friend who said to me once that the past plays tricks on you, makes you think it's still ahead of you, waiting to happen. I liked all the chaos and then the stillness at the end. And I had to...
As usual, beautiful. It's as
Posted on Sat, 30 Apr 2022
As usual, beautiful. It's as flickering and entancing as its subject matter. I liked how you connected yourself with them at the end.
Read full commentPosted in butterfly moment
I loved it. Just the sort of
Posted on Mon, 14 Feb 2022
I loved it. Just the sort of stuff I notice walking along, a million things soon forgotten. You captured a moment of some of them. Always will it to win!
Read full commentPosted in Looking Down and Up
It's stunning. What a
Posted on Tue, 18 Jan 2022
It's stunning. What a quietness to it. Words that stop you in your tracks. You've suggested the movement of the wolves with the pace. I like the slight repetition and the making of compound words.
Read full commentPosted in Wolves, blizzard
I love this. In a few lines
Posted on Sat, 15 Jan 2022
I love this. In a few lines you have given a feeling of plenty - especially in the 2nd and 3rd lines which work so well together - and also good wishes. Enjoy your festivities.
Read full commentPosted in A Poem for Pongal
Wow - thank you so much,
Posted on Thu, 13 Jan 2022
Wow - thank you so much, Rhiannon! Both for getting a copy and for letting me know. Have a lovely weekend. Hope the skies stay blue up there.
Read full commentPosted in near Orcop
Great comment, Di_Hard! I
Posted on Tue, 28 Dec 2021
Great comment, Di_Hard! I know what Turlough means though - I love watching paint dry on TV eg Portrait Artist of the Year etc - and I have lots of ideas but not the skill. But writing or art, it should all be about enjoyment, at whatever level...
Read full commentPosted in BBBB
I got pulled in by the
Posted on Wed, 29 Dec 2021
I got pulled in by the artwork - only to find that your words matched it in colour and grace. Really good poem.
Read full commentPosted in the seagull
Just four lines and you've
Posted on Thu, 23 Dec 2021
Just four lines and you've captured an image again. Succinct as an X at the bottom of the page.
Read full commentPosted in X is for xxx
I'm not sure which country
Posted on Tue, 21 Dec 2021
I'm not sure which country you're in but am guessing Malaysia. This is a really interesting read - past and present meeting up - and in a few lines you give a really stong impression of your father. Thinking of you all.
Read full commentPosted in Rising Waters and Fear of a Great Flood
Very wise - memories are so
Posted on Tue, 21 Dec 2021
Very wise - memories are so strong though. I had a friend who said to me once that the past plays tricks on you, makes you think it's still ahead of you, waiting to happen. I liked all the chaos and then the stillness at the end. And I had to...
Read full commentPosted in If I Could Turn Back Time
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