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I have 1182 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2672693 times and 1208 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1668 of my 15,587 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1701 votes

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Love Story 17

‘Ali come back,’ I hissed. Too late as her big feet connected with metallic bucket making it ring out. She peered back at me and put a hand over her...
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Love Story 16

We’d arranged to meet by the coal cellar, when it was dark. I’d already checked. The lights in Mrs Connolly’s house were out. Apart from the one in...
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Love Story 15

Ali came to my room after dinner. It was too cold to do anything. So we rolled about my bed, cuddling and kissing. She moaned a few times. Flashed...
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Love Story 14

Mum made us both a pot of tea and put out a plate of Digestive. We sat at the table, knee to knee. She had her fags. I’d my biscuits to dunk in my...
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Love Story 13

Da came through for his dinner. He glanced at us talking and laughing, grunted something, as he drowned the fish in salt and vinegar. Picked up his...
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1668 of my comments have received 1701 Great Feedback votes

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christmas carols let your

Posted on Fri, 27 Dec 2024

christmas carols let your festive season breath. 

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Posted in Carols at Midnight

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Christmas dinner can be

Posted on Wed, 25 Dec 2024

Christmas dinner can be tricky. Poor Pluto. Demoted to not even a Disney character now. 

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Posted in Planet Secret Santa

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Alfred may be confused but so

Posted on Tue, 24 Dec 2024

Alfred may be confused but so are tens of millons of others who grab land they say belonged to them before the Torah was written. As good a reason as any for mass murder. 

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Posted in Sojourn In Palestine (Welcome To Palestine!) by Alfred N.Muggins : Part 1

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Oh dear, Pat the pest and all

Posted on Mon, 23 Dec 2024

Oh dear, Pat the pest and all the rest. Of course, the voice that tells the trruth and says 'I hate you' is most worrying in an entertaining way. 

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Posted in Parcel for you - Part 44

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tucked indeed. My ambitions

Posted on Tue, 24 Dec 2024

tucked indeed. My ambitions once stretched to getting on a Christmas card too. 

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Posted in And what did the robin do then...?

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belief is important. innocene

Posted on Tue, 24 Dec 2024

belief is important. innocene more  so. bloody santa...I know...I know...I know. 

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Posted in Santa Pause

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that's all good news Jenny.

Posted on Sun, 22 Dec 2024

that's all good news Jenny. Have a lovely-- and mobile--Christmas. 

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Posted in Bright Side Of Life

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Women, I guess, are the

Posted on Sat, 21 Dec 2024

Women, I guess, are the bearers of light and chroniclers of darkness. 

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Posted in The Border Ballads

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a body shouldn't scare

Posted on Fri, 20 Dec 2024

a body shouldn't scare undertakers, but hey, resurrection isn't good for business, or is it? 

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Posted in It's My Party (Dead Reckoning series - Part 40)

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facial recognition, genetic

Posted on Fri, 20 Dec 2024

facial recognition, genetic sampling. Sounds like not too far from home. 

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Posted in The Last Night Chapter 21 A Past Recaptured

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